Universe

UNIVERSE Up to the sky where there millions of stars I've noticed you because you're so bright! Now deep at the ground where the precious diamonds reside, I believe you're the precious gem of my heart! I know you stand out among others Very sure this love of mine would be forever... Endless vows and sweet romance Right there where God gave us a second chance! So our dreams would be fulfilled to accomplish our fate Every falling star would be a sign of love that springs within our hearts.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/6/2012 2:05:00 PM

Hoping you continue to find the inspiration to write and share your wonderful poetry with us Jun. I enjoyed reading your poetry very much today. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/6/2012 6:23:00 AM

great work, very romantic!!

Jun Tumalad

Date: 9/6/2012 5:11:00 AM

a universe made up of stars of love... shining to the darkest night of each poet's heart! Live to love... Love to live!

Ingibo Benson
Date: 9/6/2012 6:05:00 AM

I love this piece, dear Jun. It made a lovely read. Thanks for sharing!