Universe

UNIVERSE

Up to the sky where there millions of stars
     I've noticed you because you're so bright!

Now deep at the ground where the precious diamonds reside,
     I believe you're the precious gem of my heart!

I know you stand out among others

Very sure this love of mine would be forever...

Endless vows and sweet romance

Right there where God gave us a second chance! 

So our dreams would be fulfilled to accomplish our fate

Every falling star would be a sign of  love that springs within our hearts.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
September 6, 2012 at 2:05 PM
Hoping you continue to find the inspiration to write and share your wonderful poetry with us Jun. I enjoyed reading your poetry very much today. Love, Carol
Culverhouse Avatar
September 6, 2012 at 6:23 AM
great work, very romantic!!
Tumalad Avatar
September 6, 2012 at 5:11 AM
a universe made up of stars of love... shining to the darkest night of each poet's heart! Live to love... Love to live!
Benson Avatar
September 6, 2012 at 6:05 AM
I love this piece, dear Jun. It made a lovely read. Thanks for sharing!
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