Universe

Our universe touches our five senses.
Visions of the darkness as a fire blazes,
Our suns flare like a whispering wind
Venus sending calls in mysterious flavor.
Contact with Mars brings life’s substance.
Earth entices the universe filled with tears.
Mother Moon our overseer of natural reason.
Five elements hold focal point together still.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Winter Avatar
March 14, 2009 at 7:24 AM
Very unique and well done! Yes, good luck if this is for the contest! Love, Shar
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March 14, 2009 at 7:07 AM
Very nicely done, Cecil!! Good luck if this enters the contest! Excellent job! ~ Carrie
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