Joseph May Poet Verse

Universe

Use telescopes but are
 Unable to count its
 Untold number of stars
 Utterly vast, stretching
 Unendingly across
 Upper galactic zones
 Until infinity

 4-30-2021
 Pleiades U Poetry Contest
 Sponsor: Kim Merryman

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Sara Kendrick May 12, 2021 at 6:43 AM Very creative and well thought out. I enjoyed reading your winner. Way to go. Congrats. Sara

David Mchattie May 5, 2021 at 6:26 PM Very clever. Good luck in the contest. Have a great day.

Kim Merryman May 4, 2021 at 6:54 PM An excellent description of the universe, Joseph! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M

Brandy Nicole May 3, 2021 at 8:18 PM "Unable to count, its Untold number of stars" Oh my ! There is something about *Space* that leaves me in complete awe. You have taken me there. Congratulations Joseph, on a well deserved win. :) I am smiling. :) Brandy

Andrea Dietrich May 3, 2021 at 3:05 PM Love the word you chose and how you did it. congrats, Joseph.

Kim Rodrigues May 3, 2021 at 12:39 PM Congratulations, Joseph!

Marilene Evans May 3, 2021 at 9:00 AM Congratulations, Joseph! What an imagery!

Jan Allison May 3, 2021 at 8:41 AM to infinity and beyonddddd many congrats on your win Jospeh:-) hugs Jan xx

Christuraj Alex May 3, 2021 at 6:51 AM Congratulations!

Daniel Turner May 3, 2021 at 6:31 AM Congratulations Joseph. I think the human mind has a hard time imagining the vastness of infinity.

Vijay Pandit April 30, 2021 at 7:46 AM No telescope to reach that infinity you so brilliantly describe. All the best, Joseph.

Alexis Y. April 30, 2021 at 6:31 AM WoW! Joseph, You did an amazing job with the letter U. You made it look so easy, I’m finding it quite difficult to write a Pleiades with the letter U. Congratulations in advance. Have a wonderful day and weekend:-) Alexis

Joanna Daniel April 30, 2021 at 6:14 AM You said it well, "until infinity" and to understand that our God created it is flabbergasting:) well written, Joseph:)

Victor Buhagiar April 30, 2021 at 5:55 AM I always felt that the universe is infinite. It seems to grow and grow. Best for a win.