Universe

Use telescopes but are Unable to count its Untold number of stars Utterly vast, stretching Unendingly across Upper galactic zones Until infinity 4-30-2021 Pleiades U Poetry Contest Sponsor: Kim Merryman

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/12/2021 6:43:00 AM

Very creative and well thought out. I enjoyed reading your winner. Way to go. Congrats. Sara

David Mchattie

Date: 5/5/2021 6:26:00 PM

Very clever. Good luck in the contest. Have a great day.

Kim Merryman

Date: 5/4/2021 6:54:00 PM

An excellent description of the universe, Joseph! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M

Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/3/2021 8:18:00 PM

"Unable to count, its Untold number of stars" Oh my ! There is something about *Space* that leaves me in complete awe. You have taken me there. Congratulations Joseph, on a well deserved win. :) I am smiling. :) Brandy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/3/2021 3:05:00 PM

Love the word you chose and how you did it. congrats, Joseph.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/3/2021 12:39:00 PM

Congratulations, Joseph!

Carol Louise Moon

Date: 5/3/2021 11:05:00 AM

Joseph, congratulations on your win for a fine Pleiades. Carol Louise

Marilene Evans

Date: 5/3/2021 9:00:00 AM

Congratulations, Joseph! What an imagery!

Jan Allison

Date: 5/3/2021 8:41:00 AM

to infinity and beyonddddd many congrats on your win Jospeh:-) hugs Jan xx

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/3/2021 6:51:00 AM

Congratulations!

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/3/2021 6:31:00 AM

Congratulations Joseph. I think the human mind has a hard time imagining the vastness of infinity.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/30/2021 7:46:00 AM

No telescope to reach that infinity you so brilliantly describe. All the best, Joseph.

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/30/2021 6:31:00 AM

WoW! Joseph, You did an amazing job with the letter U. You made it look so easy, I’m finding it quite difficult to write a Pleiades with the letter U. Congratulations in advance. Have a wonderful day and weekend:-) Alexis

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/30/2021 6:14:00 AM

You said it well, "until infinity" and to understand that our God created it is flabbergasting:) well written, Joseph:)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/30/2021 5:55:00 AM

I always felt that the universe is infinite. It seems to grow and grow. Best for a win.