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Universal Love

Universal Love The stars are like diamonds, shining brightly in your eyes Illuminating my darkness as you cover me with your skies The moon in it's splendour is nothing when compared to you Your reflection of my love comes beaming right on through You keep circling me, just as the planets do the sun Visions of you spinning in orbit, just makes me come undone You flash before my eyes, appearing just like Haley's comet Meteor showers of love blazing down , as to me they plummet Different worlds collide, explosions of hate try to obliterate us We shield ourselves in our black hole, leave them in our cosmic dust You are Venus and I am Mars and we are both feeling fine tonight Synchronized we dance in harmony, as universal love takes flight John Derek Hamilton April 11,2016

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Date: 6/13/2016 1:07:00 PM
Great romantic poem! The first stanza in particular is off the charts.
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John Hamilton
Date: 6/13/2016 4:33:00 PM
Wow, thanks Tom, thought you might like it! Thanks for the visit and comments much appreciated.JDH
Date: 4/12/2016 2:16:00 PM
Wow John, how romantic, I love anything talking about the stars...:)-luloo
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John Hamilton
Date: 4/12/2016 4:51:00 PM
Thanks Laura

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