Universal Love

Universal Love


The stars are like diamonds, shining brightly in your eyes
Illuminating my darkness as you cover me with your skies
The moon in it's splendour is nothing when compared to you
Your reflection of my love  comes beaming right on through

You keep circling me, just as the planets do the sun
Visions of you spinning in orbit, just makes me come undone
You flash before my eyes, appearing just like Haley's comet
Meteor showers of love blazing down , as to me they plummet

Different worlds collide, explosions of hate try to obliterate us
We shield ourselves in our black hole, leave them in our cosmic dust
You are Venus and I am Mars and we are both feeling fine tonight
Synchronized we dance in harmony, as universal love takes flight


John Derek Hamilton
April 11,2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Quigley Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 1:07 PM
Great romantic poem! The first stanza in particular is off the charts.
Hamilton Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 4:33 PM
Wow, thanks Tom, thought you might like it! Thanks for the visit and comments much appreciated.JDH
Scars Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 2:16 PM
Wow John, how romantic, I love anything talking about the stars...:)-luloo
Hamilton Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 4:51 PM
Thanks Laura
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