Unique

The soul walks through a cemented dream
One concrete path towards destiny
Walking alone equates to testing fate
Surely it is taboo to be unique
One concrete path towards destiny
Discussion over what lies in between is blasphemy 
Surely it is taboo to be unique
Forbid any uncommon thought or word
Discussion over what lies in between is blasphemy 
Walking alone equates to testing fate
Forbid any uncommon thought or word
The soul walks through a cemented dream
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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May 3, 2009 at 9:44 PM
Melissa, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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April 28, 2009 at 12:28 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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November 12, 2008 at 12:22 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem of the week! Laura :)
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November 12, 2008 at 12:05 PM
A vague recollection of this....congrads on being featured.:) Regards, Sara
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November 10, 2008 at 12:58 PM
Congratulations on being featured this week, Melissa. Well deserved with this wonderful poem. ~ Carrie
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November 10, 2008 at 7:21 AM
Congratulations Melissa on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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November 10, 2008 at 3:37 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week.Love, Carol
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November 10, 2008 at 3:35 AM
Interesting write with what I think a great form! Congratulations on your great poem being featured. Love, Chitra
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November 9, 2008 at 4:38 PM
This is a thought provoking poem. Interesting topic with an interesting slant. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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November 9, 2008 at 4:09 PM
Congratulations Melissa on "Unique" being featured. Vince
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