Unique

Oh for your loving caress
The longing for your gentle touch
When you're near I am so refreshed
Now that I've experienced you I long for more

Your scent is so unique
It's just right for my sensitive nose
The gentleness when you float across my skin
If I could just have you twice a day

When you're near I want to sing
You're also an eye opener
Until you came I was fooled
Now that I have you Dial I can go anywhere
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Ryerson Avatar
October 11, 2009 at 2:49 AM
You had me week in the knees there until the last verse! Great stuff, Sara! Safegaurd for me mostly until I get tired of it , then switch to something else until I get tired of THAT, then....and so on - Tim
Brown Avatar
October 10, 2009 at 5:14 PM
I enjoyed reading your awesome poetry today. Thank you Sara. I hope you have a wonderful fun filled weekend. Love, Carol
Nunn Avatar
October 10, 2009 at 10:16 AM
Good and funny, a fresh feeling to soap, I enjoyed it. Thanks for your comments on Identity theft..I tried to put some humor it it, but you are right, sad in a way, we will all get there someday? Danny
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October 10, 2009 at 5:55 AM
LOL!!! I went to the web thinking that you should send this poem to Dial Corporation. Your poem is so romantically funny. But look what I found!!! LOL!!! Oh NO!!!! http://www.eeoc.gov/press/4-24-03-b.html Love to you. I'm going to favorite this one. Dial is the only soap that I can use.... allergies! Love, Dane
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October 10, 2009 at 2:53 AM
Sara, I love your poetry. It pulls me in and zaps me with a little "dry" humor. It is refreshingly unique. Keep writing, friend. Love to you. Dane Ann
L Avatar
October 10, 2009 at 1:05 AM
very romantic, nice,,,
Strand Avatar
October 10, 2009 at 12:29 AM
Sara Thank you for your welcome comments Rgds Brian
Pickett Avatar
October 9, 2009 at 10:54 PM
I use Newport Beach, by Hollister... Musky like Jovan, with a hint of Preferred Stock..... 17 dollars a bottle...... Sara, this was a "random thought" if i've ever seen one.....Awesome.........:JP]
Anish Avatar
October 9, 2009 at 8:30 PM
Sounds like good thing. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Owens Avatar
October 9, 2009 at 8:03 PM
I like my Softsoap...It smells like Mangoes...lol Loved your poem...Marty
Goff Avatar
October 9, 2009 at 5:49 PM
will have to re-evaluate my 'Irish Spring!' .... much fun Sara!... and thanks for all your wonderful comments!... jim
Lopez Avatar
October 9, 2009 at 5:45 PM
very funny Sara === smiles ==== this was fun write to read! makes me want to visit my bar of soap.........
Sheart Avatar
October 9, 2009 at 4:26 PM
LOL!!! To funny! We all could use a good laugh around here today. Thanks hun, you're great, keep them coming, smile. Love Light Truth Patricia, Where's my dial great ending!
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