Alan Young Poet Free verse

UNION

Swarms of worshippers agitate the Sun
Sun unleashes fire on fire 
While the morning Moon pines.

Living heart sacrificed, thrust sun-ward still beating
Severed head bounces block-like down wet black steps
Tipping into the open throat of the engorged beast below

Moon unnoticed slips sideways to touch his bright edge 
Sun allows her eclipse to close then silently cross
Sun-starved minions slow and stop.

Away from swarm’s gaze Sun softens and sets
While Moon cradles him.
They join beneath the horizon.

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Inspired by imagery from the film Apocalypto, where the union of Sun and Moon eclipses the horrific human drama below, evoking the inner process of individuation.

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Alison A Smith October 10, 2026 at 5:54 PM The free-verse form gives the poem a stark, ritual rhythm, moving from violent spectacle towards quiet intimacy. Sun and Moon become compelling figures of fury and tenderness; their union beneath the horizon offers a powerful contrast to the human horror above, giving the closing lines a sense of inward reconciliation. Alan Young October 10, 2026 at 6:07 PM Dear Alison I am new to this. Thanks so much for reading my poems and taking the time to comment. If you can suggest how I can improve that would be wonderful.