Uninvited Guests

The deer stand under the balcony

With looks plainly saying "please feed me".

They invade our gardens

Without 'beg your pardons'

But still expect to get meals for free.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 10:39 PM
hahaha a cute one! LUv, Andrea
Rhinem Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 6:31 PM
Smile ~ Ahh, those cute innocent little deers; why not offer them a kind crumb or two from the banquets table dear lady for, its the loving thing to perhaps do ~ Smile, "Hi Francine!" ~ I have noticed Your writing dear and, You can truly pour brilliance upon the canvas sometimes; very lovely to behold indeed dear! ~ "Much Love & Warmth Always to You & Yours," John!:) ~ Smile, let us go view another dear lady....
Mitchell Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 6:05 PM
Well! How rude of them! ; )
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