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The deer stand under the balcony With looks plainly saying "please feed me". They invade our gardens Without 'beg your pardons' But still expect to get meals for free.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/7/2010 10:39:00 PM
hahaha a cute one! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/6/2010 6:31:00 PM
Smile ~ Ahh, those cute innocent little deers; why not offer them a kind crumb or two from the banquets table dear lady for, its the loving thing to perhaps do ~ Smile, "Hi Francine!" ~ I have noticed Your writing dear and, You can truly pour brilliance upon the canvas sometimes; very lovely to behold indeed dear! ~ "Much Love & Warmth Always to You & Yours," John!:) ~ Smile, let us go view another dear lady....
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Date: 8/6/2010 6:05:00 PM
Well! How rude of them! ; )
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