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From the mists ... Why are you here? Half a world away, so not your volition I did not lay down with thoughts of you I did not lie here, eyes closed, waiting on your ghosts Bent on nothing but you in the diaphanous moments before sleep You were not even a wisp of meanderings Yet, here you are, haunting me again Strings of my heart wound tight You, eager to pluck them without pity or prudence Sapphire gaze, chiclet smile, chili pepper lips, linen skin And the connection, unspoken, that made the ordinary so ... immaculate Every hope, plan and capricious impulse, you commanded And you do again, here, though you waste not a musing on me It is not my wish to wake again to the reality of loss Eyes crimped with phantom tears Soul yearning, aching ... but I will The foolish pawn for a memory Hopeless and helpless Decidedly damned ... In dreams. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Strand No 660 Any Theme Any Form" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 1/30/2020 9:02:00 AM
wow amazing dear Greg! You never cease to amaze me. x:-)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/30/2020 10:34:00 PM
Thank you so much, Lu Loo - I greatly appreciate it! :o) <3
Date: 2/27/2019 3:58:00 PM
Great imagery Greg, chili pepper lips, diaphanous...great word, enjoyed...would have won my Bardenesque contest!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/27/2019 4:49:00 PM
Ha! Thank you, but I doubt I could have topped the winners - those were great! (Pleased that you liked this one, my friend). :-)
Date: 2/21/2019 7:30:00 PM
Ah, Yes, those interminable nightly visitations......longing in a dreaded form
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/22/2019 2:59:00 PM
Indeed, John ... thank you for your comment!

Book: Shattered Sighs