Uninvited

a cold gust
pervading the room
an uninvited guest
a glacial entity
imposing
hovering
taking over
bound to stay
made itself 
at home



AP: 2nd place 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Bush Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 10:42 AM
A chilling & thrilling ghost story.
Gauthier Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 11:26 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Jean.
Kiser Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 10:46 AM
"an uninvited guest a glacial entity"; fabulous imagery...well penned.
Gauthier Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 11:31 AM
Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, ML.
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