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unintended innuendo

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“as we passed her she did wilt
which caused in us sense of guilt
since our stance perhaps did cause
to put her heart’s joy on pause

though we’re gentle, not hostile
we diminished her soul’s smile
since our aura as she viewed
scent of love did not exude”

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captivating my every illusive thought.
I detected sadness in her lovely eyes.
the silent glances between us sought.
her gaze was directly at me, I realize.

I imagined the scent of her perfume.
all other sound completely faded.
she softly smiled across the room.
my soul, she had blissfully invaded.

my heart beat reached a crescendo.
gladly I would be her slave for life.
a result of her innocent inuendo.
I could imagine her becoming my wife. 

from so far, looking down at her hand.
her wedding ring shone to my dismay.
her beguiling look made me understand.
she smiled, turned and walked away.

vanished from sight, never to be seen again.
into my loving mind she often sneaks.
wishing to see her, have no idea when.
its louder than words, when silence speaks.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Anaya Avatar
May 4, 2025 at 8:15 AM
The scent of love did not exude, his perspective for the contest is an interesting one, yours came out seamlessly Wendy. Love at first sight. Effortlessly rhyming, it leaves some hope in the end? A joy to read more poems from you.
Volumes Avatar
May 4, 2025 at 4:30 PM
I never know how close or far from the mark I am sweet Anaya. I let my muse figure it out and just hope for the best. As always your words of encouragement are appreciated. Take care, with my best wishes.
Narain Avatar
May 2, 2025 at 10:46 AM
iIncidentally it is usual husband prescpective. We realize what we miss when she is gone. Remarkable write.
Volumes Avatar
May 2, 2025 at 1:15 PM
oh Jay, we ladies can be guilty of that too. I didn't realise until my husband had a stroke, just how much I relied on him. Thanks for your kind words. As always they are appreciated.
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