Uniform Tangle

So I see how cruel life may be in a minute,
All around people’s faces gleam & glare
At my gloomy face but never see my net.
And I cry and cry and cry to get ‘em fair.

From times past, I knew of what may be
The finale of this sweet short time gained;
But now it comes with great dismay, to me.
With thoughts of melancholy stained.

Am losing my job to my brother,
I teach him my work as a father
Does to his sons and to the other,
He knows not my hearts as they gather.

They give a life, a life they can’t retain,
They offer me a choice, a choice not mine;
They lead me to the grave, to bury me and the ten;
But they in turn smile and smile as they dine

And so I see that they are not to be
The people I perceive may little see,
My serene into whirlwind occur to me
At a peek and glaze and short see.

Whatever the Asian will decide,
However I cope with them all,
I implore all the good to side
With me as evil entirely will fall.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 11/17/2015 11:08:00 PM
Dennis, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**"
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Date: 1/18/2012 11:56:00 AM
I stopped by your poetry today to see if you have written anything new Dennis. I hope that you will pick up your pen and write a new poem very soon and share it with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/11/2012 5:41:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup Dennis, enjoyed your poem. Elizabeth
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Date: 1/9/2012 5:20:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Dennis. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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