Russell Sivey Poet Rispetto

Unified Heartbeat

Like the heart that got washed away by the sea
Like the blessings shown on us flying away
Lost love crumbles before us which cannot be
The need outweighs the displeasure of each day
But life ceased the unified heartbeat within
Time made these broken links, knocking off our grin
We were once inseparable, but now moved
Like stars in the sky falling, they’re disapproved

Russell Sivey

Based on an old relationship.

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Jan Allison March 31, 2014 at 10:54 AM Oh Russell this made me so sad - beautifully written emotional poem. Hope things have improved since then. Hugs Jan x

Sara Kendrick March 4, 2014 at 5:53 AM Reads like this relationship was worse than crying a river for the sea had its fill of it..Great work about love lost..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Demetrios Trifiatis March 4, 2014 at 5:49 AM Life means change and change is life, my friend Russell. Let us wait for change again the balance to bring and the hearts to sing the song of unity once more!

Richard Lamoureux March 3, 2014 at 1:16 PM Hi Russell, You inspired me to give this form a try, please let me know if I got it right. Thanks Richard.

Richard Lamoureux March 3, 2014 at 8:37 AM I'm glad you escaped this relationship, you are a fortunate man. We are on similar wave lengths today. I enjoyed your Rispetto.

Kayod5 Kayode March 3, 2014 at 3:12 AM That is life Russell,20 children can not play for 20 years;can they even play for 10 years? We live today. Great work Russell.Kudos.

Robert Pettit March 3, 2014 at 12:01 AM It's history now. Live in the present. Another fine write, Russell.