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Noah gathered the animals two of a kind, But neglected the unicorn- it does not exist; Except in legend and on a magical island, And to go there- I just need to close my eyes. Oh, it is a wild untamed emerald island, Its shores caressed by whispering waves; And within the thick forest dwells a unicorn, A white horse with a large magical horn. On this fantasy island he runs wild and free, And in my wandering dreams, I visit him; He is fierce- with great strength and beauty, But for me he lays aside all fear and comes. I speak softly, stroking his mane with love, And all the night we ride under the moon. _____________________________ June 7, 2016 Poetry/Quatorzain/Unicorn Island Copyright Protected, ID 16-798-165-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Island of Fantasy sponsor, Nayda Ivette Negron Ninth Place

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Date: 6/13/2016 11:15:00 AM
Now, I must try this form. It makes one's writing exudes let alone the poet herself. ;) Congrats on the placement, BW.
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Date: 6/13/2016 7:44:00 AM
Broken Wings, perfect for the contest, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 6/12/2016 7:43:00 PM
Nice to be back to congratulate you on your win, Broken. I did say it was a winner then. So, cingratulations. ~karam~
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Date: 6/12/2016 5:10:00 PM
this is so lovely, Constance. Your idea for this contest was quite unique. Congrats for a well deserved win.
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Date: 6/12/2016 11:56:00 AM
Congratulations Constance on the Island of Fantasy contest.
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Date: 6/10/2016 10:36:00 AM
What a wonderful fantasy Island Broken wings - a delightful poem good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Date: 6/8/2016 11:12:00 AM
Very lovely and magical, Broken Wings and your recitation of this mystical poem makes it come alive so well! All the best for the contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 6/8/2016 11:23:00 PM
Sandra, thanks so much for the nice compliments and the 7 and hugs ~
Date: 6/8/2016 1:06:00 AM
The unicorn's island now belongs to you, dear Constance:) lovely write:)
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Date: 6/8/2016 11:23:00 PM
Jo thanks so much for visiting with the lovely ~
Date: 6/7/2016 12:02:00 PM
Thank you for transporting me to the land of the unicorn by your beautiful poem, Broken Wings. This is a sure winner. ~karam~
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Date: 6/8/2016 11:24:00 PM
Karam, thanks for visiting with the beautiful ~
Date: 6/7/2016 7:43:00 AM
Oh I would love to see that fantasy. Fascinating and desirable write :)
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Date: 6/8/2016 11:25:00 PM
Casarah thanks for visiting and the fascinating, I love that word ~
Date: 6/7/2016 6:50:00 AM
Great fantasy write, perfect for the contest, good luck Constance...
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Date: 6/8/2016 11:25:00 PM
Charlie, thanks for the nice comment~
Date: 6/7/2016 4:52:00 AM
I loved this unicorn fantasy....
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Date: 6/8/2016 11:27:00 PM
LD, and thank you for visiting ~

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