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A poem written for my friend Anna You, special magical, you! Did you just see my tears of pain, How I in vain tried to? I want to... I sit here hiding, in the rain. No discrimination between that one moist or the other. Don't smother. Where've you been? You are so warm, I've never seen You before, are you my mother? I rest my wounds on that cool horn, Can you please cure me? I'm born, Forlorn... Will you look at me and see? Make me whole, I'm so torn... You are my legs, my life, my all. A strong back to replace mine, Please be my spine. If I fall, Don't call, Nudge gently, so I will be fine. We wander off to distant land. You carry me, I you. You too. With caring hand, Caress your manes, use magic sand. Styx and Acheron we'll plough through! *** January 27, 2017

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Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 4/13/2017 2:27:00 PM

Lovely poem Darren, a wonderful gift :) my first tattoo was a unicorn, symbolizing "no regret" prompted by the unicorn in the 1982 animated film "The Last Unicorn" a personal favourite ;)

Darren White
Date: 4/13/2017 2:31:00 PM

Really beautiful, I have no tattoos, but a Unicorn? Wonderful :)

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/13/2017 1:19:00 PM

Good Evening Darren. This is simply beautiful in every way. It is very moving and expressive. We readers thank you for sharing it with us. I'm certain your friend Anna treasures this. How could she not. Have a wonderful night. Well done entirely.

Darren White
Date: 4/13/2017 1:29:00 PM

Thank you Lisa! I had completely forgotten I had Anna's poem posted here :) I am so very happy that you like it! Anna loves her poem.

White Wolf

Date: 1/27/2017 6:56:00 PM

Awesome! Duir! Loved it.

Darren White
Date: 1/27/2017 9:52:00 PM

Thanks Budgie, I love Unicorns!

Tim Smith

Date: 1/27/2017 8:58:00 AM

Very tender and endearing.

Darren White
Date: 1/27/2017 9:01:00 AM

Thank you, Tim :)

Claudia Polydoro

Date: 1/27/2017 8:55:00 AM

Loved it! It is a magical one! Beautifully written my sweet friend :*

Darren White
Date: 1/27/2017 9:01:00 AM

Thanks Claudia <3 :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/27/2017 6:38:00 AM

Tears...beautiful!

Darren White
Date: 1/27/2017 7:07:00 AM

Thank you Kim :)

Chris Green

Date: 1/27/2017 5:56:00 AM

A beautiful poem for whom seems to be a wonderful and caring friend. This was really nice Darren. It felt magical but then friendship is always magical in my book.

Darren White
Date: 1/27/2017 6:07:00 AM

She is, she is simply wonderful and I love her much :) It's a magical poem and there are little things in it only she will understand. But that's the thing with poetry: with a bit of luck you write something magical that appeals to everyone. Thanks Chris :)