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this poem written based upon this image for online poetry class assignment

UNHURRIED

one instant breath rising from calm stillness, a small beginning unfolding into light~ the soul remembering how to open its hidden windows and let the soft, unhurried truth in, a widening that feels like coming home
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Jones Avatar
April 7, 2026 at 5:45 PM
This has a feel of testimony and unhurried truth. Well done.
Gauthier Avatar
April 7, 2026 at 10:47 AM
charming ~
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