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-Unheard Plea

She could bring sunlight to the darkness
Warmth to the cold
Joy to the sorrowful
The inner child to the old

She had such a passion for life
Viewed through positive eyes
Not perfect by any means
She had lows and highs

After colliding with trauma ….she lost her way
Addictions mighty grip took hold
Desperate, alone and homeless
No more living a life of gold

“Help me” ,she managed to whisper
As she lay in pain and harm
Not a soul heard her desperate plea
As she died with a dirty needle in her arm

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Bill Baker

February 22, 2024 at 6:02 PM

Terrible tragic end to a life, partially because no one was listening to her cries for help, or just didn't care. Very sad situation that many find themselves in. Thanks for reminding us we need to be aware of others as we deal with like ourselves. I've enjoyed catching up on your poetry today, Deb. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us through your heartfelt poetry, my dear friend. My twin from another mother, Bill :-)

Gershon Wolf

January 21, 2024 at 7:46 PM

What can I add? Her end is simply overwhelming. ~ gw

Deb M

January 25, 2024 at 11:57 AM

And unfortunately so true to life for many BB…..Thankyou….Debx

Jerry Brotherton

January 19, 2024 at 6:48 PM

Such an emotional poem, Deb. Too many fall into addiction. A wonderful write sister Deb. A favorite for me.

Deb M

January 25, 2024 at 11:56 AM

Wow a fave from you also Brother Jerry….l am truly honoured my friend! Sister Debx

Ink Empress

January 19, 2024 at 12:12 PM

Dear debsz, this made me tear up really. Youv described the underlying truth of addiction so well here, how trauma often leads to that and one is left alone and forsaken and frowned upon by the society not realising what they truly need is help, as it is an illness that so many are stuck in. It made me the most sad reading the last lines. Ive seen so many go through this. Poignant and heartfelt storytelling of an individual suffering with addiction youve delivered. I felt his one deeply. FAVE

Deb M

January 25, 2024 at 11:55 AM

Addiction is so very very sad andcan happen to anyone so we should try not judge. A fave from you sweet ink is very special as l value your thoughts greatly ….you are such a gifted poet. Thankyou for such kind words as always sweet girl! Debx

Daniel Henry Rodgers

January 19, 2024 at 6:36 AM

Dear Deb M, I am a D&A and MH Counselor and your poem resonates with me for it is a powerful exploration of the human struggle with addiction. It’s a heartbreaking journey from light to darkness, from joy to despair. Your words serve as a stark call of the silent battles many face, often unnoticed. Keep using your voice to shed light on these heartwrenching issues. - Blessings, Daniel

Deb M

January 20, 2024 at 9:44 AM

Thankyou Daniel l will do! I really appreciate your encouraging kind words! Good on you for doing what you do…We need people like you in this world! Debx

Vijay Pandit

January 19, 2024 at 6:07 AM

So sad--but true to life.

Deb M

January 20, 2024 at 9:42 AM

Indeed it is Vijay! Debx

Victor Buhagiar

January 19, 2024 at 3:24 AM

Oh why stoop to such acts that lead to suicide? I always feel a tear when I listen to Whitney Houston.

Deb M

January 19, 2024 at 5:19 AM

Thanks Victor ….yes Whitney H is a sad story! Debx

Shirley Hawkins

January 18, 2024 at 2:20 PM

Taking drugs starts and ends with a cry for help; it is a sad state of affairs. Another heartfelt, compassionate poem, Deb. I hope you are feeling better today. Look after yourself. Love, Old Duck XX

Deb M

January 19, 2024 at 3:09 AM

Thankyou my dear Shirley….all good for me! Will email you….Debx