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Unheard

whispered rumours of the true things


drown in  shallows of ego's hubbub

NOTE
The philosopher Walter Benjamin's comment on Kafka's writin was the inspiration for this 
poem

Copyright © Brian Strand | Year Posted 2009

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Sharon Winter Date: 1/8/2009 10:22:00 AM Love this Brian. Especially 'drown in shallows'. Excellent. Love, Shar Login to Reply

Robin L. Gass Date: 1/8/2009 7:12:00 AM This rings clear with truth and the form is lovely. Thank you for the support and encouragement. Love, Robin Login to Reply

Christopher Higgins Date: 1/8/2009 4:25:00 AM This is very strong Brian and much truths are revealed in these two lines. Great job! Login to Reply

Kristin Reynolds Date: 1/8/2009 3:14:00 AM Brian, you/he could not be more right - this is a very wose write and nothing but the truth! Hubbub is the perfect word here, as ego is chaos. Truth get's attacked within and without all the time, many truths are hard to catch and hear. excellent! Love, Kristin Login to Reply

Raul Moreno Date: 1/8/2009 3:12:00 AM Your desire for learning and teaching is 360°. Keep up the good work and I posted a tribute for you today. Thanks for all that you do for us here at PS...Raul Login to Reply