Unhappiness Is

UNHAPPINESS IS



Unhappiness is,
When I fail your melodic voice each moment
To hear       
And 
Your ethereal caresses on my body I do
Not sense 

Unhappiness is,
When the delicacies your lips are offering
Unable I’m to taste       
And
The exquisite aroma of your soul’s breath
Incapable I’m to scent

Unhappiness is,
When impossible your blazing eyes and your stunning 
Figure to see

But most of all, unhappiness is,

When I fear,
You, my precious dream, might forever have stopped 
Loving me!



©Demetrios Trifiatis
   27 February 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Andresen Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 3:10 PM
Unhappy, S-mail - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 3:35 PM
What makes me unhappy has been written in my poem! The rest is fine! Thank you!
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February 27, 2013 at 1:17 PM
Demetrios, wow, not to feel, kiss and adore what makes me happy, would be the most fearful moment on my life. I'm happy to have read your poem.. always~ PD
Trifiatis Avatar
February 28, 2013 at 6:21 AM
Thank you MY POET BUILDER!
Sivey Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 7:39 AM
This is a wonderfully delightful write my friend! You have painted an incredible picture by your amazing words within this elaborate poem! What a fabulous piece, So Awesome, Great Work!!
Trifiatis Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 7:51 AM
Thank you my friend! Thank you very much!
Manassian Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 5:26 AM
Ma...ma ti enai aufto? Oh my!!!!!!!!!!!....absolutely beautiful! Romance and love in every single line! In my favorite file it goes...with a GREAT NUMBER 7.
Trifiatis Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 5:37 AM
You are generous and kind. Thank you!
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