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Unhappily Ever After

I have loved you since I was young. You were it for me and I didn't crave another. I was on cloud nine that you were my lover. But as the years went by you grew distant. You didn't look at me the same, You didn't touch me the same, You didn't hold me the same, When you said you didn't want to be with me any longer, It was like someone punched me in the stomach real hard. I thought we would be together forever. You were my fairytale my happily ever after. I loved you with my entire being…….. But for some reason that wasn't enough, Because you still left me…….. Contest: Sometimes Love Is Not Enough Sponsor: Silent One 09/08/2019

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Constance La France

Date: 9/17/2019 3:16:00 PM

Alexis congratulations on your win

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/15/2019 12:42:00 AM

So sad. God bless you and congratulations in the contest win

Alexis Y.
Date: 9/15/2019 1:11:00 AM

Hi Regina, I appreciate that you commented on my poem and for congratulating me. Congrats to you too:-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/14/2019 2:42:00 PM

- Congratulations, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.
Date: 9/15/2019 1:09:00 AM

Hi Anne- Lise, Thank you very much . Congratulations to you too:-) Alexis

Silent One

Date: 9/14/2019 12:33:00 PM

Somethings in life are just not meant to be.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Alexis Y.
Date: 9/14/2019 1:05:00 PM

Hi Silent, Thank you so much. I appreciate my placement in the contest:-) Alexis

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/12/2019 11:46:00 AM

Sad when you love someone and they don't return that love - it can break your hard - well penned and heartfelt my dear friend - i love this write. Hugs and blessings, Jenny.

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 9/11/2019 12:05:00 PM

It's a huge loss to lose someone we love. Many don't realise it. This poem is to be read by every such person. Poignant write. Hugs from India.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/11/2019 4:38:00 AM

A verse from the heart Alexis, his loss not yours. Hope you're well. Tom

Paul Callus

Date: 9/10/2019 1:02:00 PM

A very lovely touching poem based on sad reality, Alexis. Yes, eventually he left, but the writing was already on the wall. ~ Warm regards // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/10/2019 8:07:00 AM

This is hard to read, it brings feelings flooding back. You got to the heart of the matter. A perfect piece for the contest. Hugs Rick.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/10/2019 1:01:00 AM

So often in life it's 'unhappily ever after,' ala your title, at least for a while---untll it turns out to have been 'all for the best.' G.L. in the contest, Alexis. ~ Gershon

Lyric Man

Date: 9/9/2019 8:56:00 PM

He was just a Fool! I would long to be what he never grew into, but alas.. I am just a Fairytale! Alexis, I love this girl!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/9/2019 5:38:00 PM

this one is very moving, Alexis. You did an excellent job with the theme. I took it a totally different way (not posted yet though)

Bobby May

Date: 9/9/2019 12:54:00 PM

WOW! Alexis if Silent doesn't place you first I will have a taking to him, wonderful write my sweet friend!!

Chris Green

Date: 9/9/2019 12:34:00 PM

Such a sad poem my friend and hopefully it was only written for the contest and is purely fictional, though the emotions hot so hard that makes me think it might be more fact. Best wishes Alexis

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/9/2019 12:30:00 PM

The pain of heartbreak is deeply felt through your words in this poignant piece Alexis. Beautifully expressed! Best wishes for a win with this beauty! : ) xxoo

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/9/2019 12:14:00 PM

I can feel that punch in this Alexis. Well written! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/9/2019 12:06:00 PM

- So sad when love is not enough ... a beautiful poem, Alexis :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)