Unfurled Rose

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Unfurled Rose
“The unfurling of an alluring rose.”
She felt something gently stirring her heart Gradually her senses flew off chart As he caressed her soft velvety charms Alien vibes, until held in his arms. Steadily her inner radiance glowed Secret special moments she'd never known Tingling all over, from head to her toes All her inhibitions away they'd flown. She'd never felt passion so intently Could it be a fairies tale, fantasy? Truly her, igniting the world afire? In a frenzied, ardent cocktail of desire. The strings of her heart at last came untied Releasing the love that she stowed inside Alike birds on wings she flew high and wide At last she felt free, no reason to hide. She felt beauteous, as never before At last she found all she’d been yearning for The years fading away into the mist In the romancing of a lover’s tryst. “A rose with no joy or the will to live Blossomed beneath her lover’s fingertips.”
6th November 2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 11/16/2020 12:27:00 PM
Hello Belle it is nice to feel the romance in this time of the virus. I love roses. enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/17/2020 10:31:00 AM
Hello Belle, yes a little romance does lift up the spirit of the heart. We do need some passion to brighten our day.I will my friend. You enjoy yours to. Darlene
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/16/2020 12:37:00 PM
Hi Darlene, a little romance lifts one's heart in many ways, and we need some passion to brighten these extraordinary days... Thank you my friend, enjoy your day too, Belle
Date: 11/8/2020 10:42:00 AM
Beautiful that one can release emotions pent up with the help of one you love and you love in return. A wonderful sensuous poem which I enjoyed thoroughly Belle. Hugs and Blessings, Jennifer.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/8/2020 10:50:00 AM
It’s the love of the loved... Thank you Jennifer, so pleased you enjoyed the read. Blessings and hugs, Belle
Date: 11/6/2020 8:03:00 AM
Oh such a sad fate for the rose, I guess even a pretty petal may struggle for love, until they find the perfect rose for them.. Its those thorns you need to watch out for ...
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/6/2020 8:10:00 AM
Not such a sad fate after all, at least she had a taste of what she’d yearned for, those thorns she’d known at last overthrown... Thank you Silent One - Belle
Date: 11/6/2020 6:28:00 AM
So beautiful...to be able to release all the stirring emotions and not hide them.Enjoyed reading you.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/6/2020 7:21:00 AM
Thank you Charmaine, so pleased you enjoyed the read... Belle
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