Unfulfilled Love Sonnet

Our eyes met from far across the full room
My eyes declared instant love for you too
Your eyes said you are my favorite bloom
My eyes shyly glanced then to me you drew

Instant soul love that is what happened
Our thoughts touched whispered I truly love you
If only another place_time we  dreamed
When we dreamed our best dream would come true

My lonely thoughts run to you wondering 
Another place__time true love's fulfillment
Our relationship would have been loving
One glance and I knew your acknowledgement

Acknowledgement of me and abandonment
Loving eyes said you're my accompaniment
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Guzzi Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 6:21 AM
sad but so often true..write. Hope you and yours are well and happy! Light & Love
Evette Avatar
September 19, 2010 at 12:16 PM
Unfulfiled Love...Beautiful. My heart is full. Lovely. Monica
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September 18, 2010 at 6:56 AM
Enjoyed much the read of your Poem, Sara...Have a great time...Gert
Brown Avatar
September 15, 2010 at 9:38 AM
It was pleasure to read your poetry today Sara. Love, Carol
Semeniuk Avatar
September 14, 2010 at 7:17 PM
very niice poem you've written! such a soft delicate side!
Sweetheart Avatar
September 14, 2010 at 4:50 PM
Well this is simply lovely Sara.. and if for Catie's new contest Love Notes.. a super top notch winner for sure luv... no stressing tonight about tomorrow..luv.. keep in faith and prayer and all will be well... like your poem ...eyes on HIM ..HIS on us.. my friend...
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