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Unfreeze Me

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Is there anyone that will sit with me? For just a little while, and hold my hand? This morning the world was black, And for a second I knew that the past hundred years The next millennia Live inside me, frozen. So simple is the pleasure of an arm A little faith, one remaining dream Save from everfrost. Is there someone who can Unfreeze me? *** May 2, 2017 Copyright © Darren White

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/6/2017 6:48:00 AM

Hi -- smile -- for this entry and for your "movements never heard" as well. Have a wonderful afternoon Darren. Your work truly is amazing and beyond.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/6/2017 4:41:00 AM

Oh Darren. How did I miss this. You have done it once again with the emotive factor. My goodness. And yes, can I sit with you. We can sit together. Can I bring the beach and all her essence to us both. I'll provide a snack so we can stay. You amaze me with your poetic talent and expressions. I love titles and you have named this perfectly. This is beautiful in every way completely and entirely. Have a wonderful afternoon. And now I need to catch my breath after reading your words.

Darren White
Date: 5/6/2017 6:21:00 AM

Lisa, it's fine, I think I sometimes miss one of your poems too... I am humbled that you love my poems so much, and always leave beautiful comments for me :)

Lynn Marie

Date: 5/5/2017 5:49:00 AM

You write so eloquent of a seemingly every day experience, can truly be the heart reaching out for what it needs, in this moment: 'the pleasure of an arm' to stave off the formidable foe, of a chilling aloneness and give eternal warmth to a 'soul fighting for life, in the embrace of love to help ease the feeling of 'oneness' turning it into a glorious, 'togetherness' for all to link arms and join in your goals to unite and 'be love', through the spirit of your beautiful.poignant poetry.

Darren White
Date: 5/5/2017 5:55:00 AM

Thank you so very much for your ever wonderful comments Lynn. That warm togetherness to conquer the cold is so important, thank you for loving my poetry :)

Darren White
Date: 5/5/2017 5:53:00 AM

Lynn Marie, I tried to write you SoupMail. Did you get it?

Maria Williams

Date: 5/4/2017 7:36:00 AM

Rest assured Dear Darren that you have many friend that are reaching out and wrapping you in their warm arms. Much Love and Blessings xxx

Darren White
Date: 5/4/2017 7:44:00 AM

Thank you Maria :) I am happy to have so many good friends!

Winged Warrior

Date: 5/2/2017 4:28:00 PM

Superbly done Darren...I really like this verse...the only thing is that you don't want to be touched by cold hands lol...all the best...hope you are feeling well...^WW^

Darren White
Date: 5/3/2017 12:45:00 AM

Heh, yes. No cold hands please :) I am always cold, even in summer I tend to wear a sweater hah.

Chris Green

Date: 5/2/2017 11:02:00 AM

My friend or should I say a friend to many here on Soup. I'm sure there is no shortage of arms to wrap around you and thaw this chill that seems to be inside of you. I'll bet you're feeling warmer already. Nicely expressed loneliness and longing.

Darren White
Date: 5/2/2017 11:18:00 AM

I sometimes need to get rid of that cold before it gets a grip on me. It can be a lonely fight, so every now and then it is so good to see there are friends out there, I am so fortunate to have so many friends, thank you my dear friend.

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/2/2017 10:06:00 AM

I like this Darren. I can sense the longing and I believe many people have these moments, just as you describe. Well done :)

Darren White
Date: 5/2/2017 11:20:00 AM

Thank you Heidi. Yes, I am sure I am not the only one!