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Unfortunate Circumstances

A certain young fellow in Frisco Went dancing one night at a disco Tipsy, I am told, When he lost billfold Now he's lost his job with Nabisco. written July 18, 2021

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Nancy Kaufman

Date: 7/21/2021 10:44:00 AM

that is so cute Milton lol nancy

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/21/2021 11:29:00 AM

Thank you, Nancy. I enjoy a good limerick now and then, too.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/18/2021 5:17:00 PM

Love that you found something that rhymed with Nabisco! This was brilliant!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/18/2021 5:48:00 PM

(chuckle). Thanks, Caren. Actually, I looked for something that would rhyme with Frisco and disco!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/18/2021 4:15:00 PM

ha ha ha very funny :-) hugs Jan xx

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/18/2021 4:59:00 PM

Glad you got a good laugh out of it, Jan. I worked and worked on it, trying to make it a bit risque, but finally gave up.