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Unforgotten

I've captured you from death's snare, While others were unaware No more worrying, You are unforgotten You are alive Others deny it Well, I know... You are unforgotten In my memory You are unforgotten

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/14/2013 12:19:00 AM

Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week. take care and good night :-) Hugs ~XOX~ LINDA

Shirley Candy

Date: 7/7/2013 9:28:00 PM

Amazing words..! congratz for being featured this week.. ~shirley

J.W. Earnings
Date: 7/7/2013 10:01:00 PM

That's me on my sister's account by accident LOL!! HAHAHA - J.W.E.

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 7/7/2013 9:59:00 PM

THANKIES! I'm excited. :DDD

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/12/2013 9:27:00 PM

Dear David, You are showing YOUR True POETIC Talent in this Superb POEM "Unforgotten" It's amazing How YOU forged this (Special ) person into YOUR Memory and gave Grace when others did not. I'm going to assume Laura is older; but that's an old man's perspective.Your Comment is much more Positive. I look forward to 16 more POETIC MasterPieces from YOUR Laureatus POETRY.(Not tonight though) I will be back to read more of YOU in a day or two. It has been great meeting YOU LOVE ALWAYS and

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire
Date: 3/12/2013 9:28:00 PM

FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 11/4/2012 12:39:00 AM

Sweet poem David. Remember you are unforgotten. loving you always, Laura

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 7/9/2010 11:31:00 AM

Ah, saved by an angel! The awesome fluttering wings which no one hears. Certainly, the world has always denied miracles as mysteries, only if they care. Great job! Joseph

J.W. Earnings

Date: 7/5/2010 2:24:00 PM

Thank you for the uplifting comments. You all have a nice day. Welcome to Poetry Soup Diiamond & others who are new to Poetry Soup! I have about 16 poems done with and I'm looking forward to showing them off to the world XD.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/4/2010 4:37:00 PM

Those we love do live on in our memories. Surely, others don't feel their presence, but as long as you do, this person will remain "unforgotten." Well done, David! Best wishes, Carolyn

Diiamond Rich

Date: 7/4/2010 2:49:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your poetry today.. I'm new to the soup so I hope you have an open mind as far as poetry. Enjoy ya day.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/4/2010 2:45:00 PM

Great short write...Keep the pen flowing.Sara

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 7/4/2010 2:42:00 PM

you captured them from death: you saved someone, you stopped someone from death? this person is something to you while the other don't even give them a name very interesting who ever you are to this person you are a good one to have near