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Unforgotten

I've captured you from death's snare,
While others were unaware
No more worrying,
You are unforgotten

You are alive
Others deny it 
Well, I know...
You are unforgotten
In my memory
You are unforgotten

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/14/2013 12:19:00 AM Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week. take care and good night :-) Hugs ~XOX~ LINDA Login to Reply

Shirley Candy Date: 7/7/2013 9:28:00 PM Amazing words..! congratz for being featured this week.. ~shirley Login to Reply J.W. Earnings Date: 7/7/2013 10:01:00 PM That's me on my sister's account by accident LOL!! HAHAHA - J.W.E. Laura Breidenthal Date: 7/7/2013 9:59:00 PM THANKIES! I'm excited. :DDD

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire Date: 3/12/2013 9:27:00 PM Dear David, You are showing YOUR True POETIC Talent in this Superb POEM "Unforgotten" It's amazing How YOU forged this (Special ) person into YOUR Memory and gave Grace when others did not. I'm going to assume Laura is older; but that's an old man's perspective.Your Comment is much more Positive. I look forward to 16 more POETIC MasterPieces from YOUR Laureatus POETRY.(Not tonight though) I will be back to read more of YOU in a day or two. It has been great meeting YOU LOVE ALWAYS and Login to Reply Hgarvey Daniel Esquire Date: 3/12/2013 9:28:00 PM FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

Laura Breidenthal Date: 11/4/2012 12:39:00 AM Sweet poem David. Remember you are unforgotten. loving you always, Laura Login to Reply

Joseph Spence Sr Date: 7/9/2010 11:31:00 AM Ah, saved by an angel! The awesome fluttering wings which no one hears. Certainly, the world has always denied miracles as mysteries, only if they care. Great job! Joseph Login to Reply

J.W. Earnings Date: 7/5/2010 2:24:00 PM Thank you for the uplifting comments. You all have a nice day. Welcome to Poetry Soup Diiamond & others who are new to Poetry Soup! I have about 16 poems done with and I'm looking forward to showing them off to the world XD. Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 7/4/2010 4:37:00 PM Those we love do live on in our memories. Surely, others don't feel their presence, but as long as you do, this person will remain "unforgotten." Well done, David! Best wishes, Carolyn Login to Reply

Diiamond Rich Date: 7/4/2010 2:49:00 PM Enjoyed reading your poetry today.. I'm new to the soup so I hope you have an open mind as far as poetry. Enjoy ya day. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 7/4/2010 2:45:00 PM Great short write...Keep the pen flowing.Sara Login to Reply

Jessica Arteaga Date: 7/4/2010 2:42:00 PM you captured them from death: you saved someone, you stopped someone from death? this person is something to you while the other don't even give them a name very interesting who ever you are to this person you are a good one to have near Login to Reply