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Unforgotten

I've captured you from death's snare,
While others were unaware
No more worrying,
You are unforgotten

You are alive
Others deny it 
Well, I know...
You are unforgotten
In my memory
You are unforgotten

dedicationfaithfamilyforgivenessfriendshipfree verse

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Poet Destroyer A

July 14, 2013 at 12:19 AM

Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week. take care and good night :-) Hugs ~XOX~ LINDA

Shirley Candy

July 7, 2013 at 9:28 PM

Amazing words..! congratz for being featured this week.. ~shirley

David William Breidenthal

July 7, 2013 at 10:01 PM

That's me on my sister's account by accident LOL!! HAHAHA - J.W.E.

Laura Breidenthal

July 7, 2013 at 9:59 PM

THANKIES! I'm excited. :DDD

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

March 12, 2013 at 9:27 PM

Dear David, You are showing YOUR True POETIC Talent in this Superb POEM "Unforgotten" It's amazing How YOU forged this (Special ) person into YOUR Memory and gave Grace when others did not. I'm going to assume Laura is older; but that's an old man's perspective.Your Comment is much more Positive. I look forward to 16 more POETIC MasterPieces from YOUR Laureatus POETRY.(Not tonight though) I will be back to read more of YOU in a day or two. It has been great meeting YOU LOVE ALWAYS and

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

March 12, 2013 at 9:28 PM

FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

Laura Breidenthal

November 4, 2012 at 12:39 AM

Sweet poem David. Remember you are unforgotten. loving you always, Laura

Joseph Spence Sr

July 9, 2010 at 11:31 AM

Ah, saved by an angel! The awesome fluttering wings which no one hears. Certainly, the world has always denied miracles as mysteries, only if they care. Great job! Joseph

David William Breidenthal

July 5, 2010 at 2:24 PM

Thank you for the uplifting comments. You all have a nice day. Welcome to Poetry Soup Diiamond & others who are new to Poetry Soup! I have about 16 poems done with and I'm looking forward to showing them off to the world XD.

Carolyn Devonshire

July 4, 2010 at 4:37 PM

Those we love do live on in our memories. Surely, others don't feel their presence, but as long as you do, this person will remain "unforgotten." Well done, David! Best wishes, Carolyn

Diiamond Rich

July 4, 2010 at 2:49 PM

Enjoyed reading your poetry today.. I'm new to the soup so I hope you have an open mind as far as poetry. Enjoy ya day.

Sara Kendrick

July 4, 2010 at 2:45 PM

Great short write...Keep the pen flowing.Sara

Jessica Arteaga

July 4, 2010 at 2:42 PM

you captured them from death: you saved someone, you stopped someone from death? this person is something to you while the other don't even give them a name very interesting who ever you are to this person you are a good one to have near

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