Unforgiven

Stand in the darkness
feel the pain inside
hear the sounds you bless
Throw away the broken pride
Yet the pain remains twisted into your soul
But no one ever gains if the world becomes cold
So you must bear the hurt and embrace the kiss
As you dream of faded eternal bliss
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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September 8, 2011 at 1:01 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Jennifer. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
Martin Avatar
September 8, 2011 at 11:06 AM
Welcome to "PS" Jennifer. Nice entry piece of poetry. Congrats and keep up the good work:) I'm looking forward to reading more of your poetry in the near future. Take care, Terry
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