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Unforgiven

Stand in the darkness feel the pain inside hear the sounds you bless Throw away the broken pride Yet the pain remains twisted into your soul But no one ever gains if the world becomes cold So you must bear the hurt and embrace the kiss As you dream of faded eternal bliss

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/8/2011 1:01:00 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Jennifer. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 9/8/2011 11:06:00 AM
Welcome to "PS" Jennifer. Nice entry piece of poetry. Congrats and keep up the good work:) I'm looking forward to reading more of your poetry in the near future. Take care, Terry
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