Unforgiven

Around a table
far-flung families gather
offer yearly thanks.
I wish I were among them
but still, they don't forgive me.

A THANKSGIVING TANKA Poetry Contest Placed 7th
Sponsored by: L MILTON HANKINS
Date wrote: 26-October-2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Croft Avatar
January 15, 2022 at 12:31 AM
how sad. families need to learn to forgive and let go no matter what!
Miller Avatar
January 16, 2022 at 1:30 AM
So true, thank you for visiting Karen.
Kendrick Avatar
November 12, 2021 at 5:04 AM
Good work about a hard topic. Sometimes in life it is hard to give forgiveness to someone who has hurt us deeply. I enjoyed reading your winner. Sara
Miller Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 8:40 AM
Thank you so much Sara
Agustin Avatar
November 11, 2021 at 3:51 AM
Congrats! Thanks for this. God bless you.
Miller Avatar
November 11, 2021 at 7:44 AM
Thank you.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 10, 2021 at 8:44 PM
Wow! Congratulations!
Miller Avatar
November 11, 2021 at 7:44 AM
Thank you, Kim.
Hankins Avatar
November 10, 2021 at 3:51 PM
Thanks so much for remember the "unforgiven," Terry. Congratulations for placing in my Thanksgiving tanka contest. Happy Thanksgiving to you!
Miller Avatar
November 11, 2021 at 7:45 AM
Thank you, Milt, for the comment, placement, and for running the contest. Happy Thanksgiving to you also.
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