Unforgivable

What unforgivable sin must one commit to be reincarnated as a slug? John G. Lawless ©6/3/2023

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I Am Anaya

Date: 6/12/2023 1:25:00 PM

I disagree with your fun poem; all a slug knows is being a slug and his slug's ecstasy! :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/3/2023 5:57:00 PM

any sin…

Jan Allison

Date: 6/3/2023 6:44:00 AM

hahaha love it:-) hugs jan xx

Di11y Da11y

Date: 6/3/2023 6:39:00 AM

Sorry for the essay, it was just a very important point! Haha :D

Di11y Da11y
Date: 6/4/2023 5:27:00 AM

You've got me wondering if there is perhaps a such a thing as a slug poet. Thought based poetry of course, heavily influenced by the enjoyment of lettuce and it's beauty...

John Lawless
Date: 6/4/2023 5:07:00 AM

and then again DD....the slug may be pondering the question..."what unforgivable sin must one commit to be reincarnated as a ....

Di11y Da11y

Date: 6/3/2023 6:38:00 AM

Maybe they are living the ultimate chill life John, perhaps we are all suffering for our sins in this form. Imagine it being the best day ever finding some lettuce and you live on an allotment and also like cabbage. Plus the world moves towards organic and stops poisoning slugs.

Deb M

Date: 6/3/2023 5:13:00 AM

Haha that made me laugh John!! Debx