Unforgivable

What unforgivable sin must one commit to be reincarnated as a slug?

John G. Lawless
©6/3/2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Anaya Avatar
June 12, 2023 at 1:25 PM
I disagree with your fun poem; all a slug knows is being a slug and his slug's ecstasy! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
June 3, 2023 at 5:57 PM
any sin…
Allison Avatar
June 3, 2023 at 6:44 AM
hahaha love it:-) hugs jan xx
M  Avatar
June 3, 2023 at 5:13 AM
Haha that made me laugh John!! Debx
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