Unforgivable

Judge not, and ye shall not be judged: condemn not, and ye shall not be condemned: forgive, and ye shall be forgiven. -- Luke 6:37 ___________________________________
I crossed the line I spilled the wine The rest of my life, I am unforgivable In crowds, in families, in my own chapel I am here to be shunned There is no victory to be won Yet everday I still prepare a bowl of fruit Hoping to once again rethread my suit Come and break bread with me Remove the spear that is there but you cannot see I am a man in desperate need of a hug Look below, we stand on the same stained rug Friday, November 12, 2021 ''U'' Contest, New Poems Only Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France
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La France Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 1:25 PM
Robert, wonderfully penned congratulations on your Second Place win in my "U" Contest, New Poems, and I love the quote you used ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Alex Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 10:32 AM
"Come and break bread with me Remove the spear that is there but you cannot see" Great writing. Congratulations!
Calasibetta Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 9:26 AM
Hi Robert, Your couplet mastered the meaning of the the scripture that you chose ... Good luck in the contest....this will be a winner. Blessings, Paulette
Neumann Avatar
November 12, 2021 at 11:52 PM
Sending you a hug ...
Poet Avatar
November 12, 2021 at 8:02 PM
In just a few sentences, you've conveyed a beautiful thought. Utmost feelings, painted in vibrant hues, are intended to settle the roaming human mind.
Faulkner Avatar
November 12, 2021 at 7:37 PM
So true, being shut off from forgiveness is a desperate and lonely feeling, a very profound write~
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