Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

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- Unforgettable Volcano Tour -

Blueberries and raspberry bushes
                                        Lush green forests
                                   great riches and delights
                     The mighty mountains towering white dressed
                                    An exclusive experience
                                      The ground rumbles
                     The sky becomes dark and the earth glows red
                                Gas collects ... in the stomach
                                     The explosion is near
                             However, this was only a small fart








04.01.2019
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Phyllis Babcock January 14, 2019 at 10:40 AM Had me chuckling with this one and yes they can be explosive at times. lol love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen January 14, 2019 at 12:07 PM - Yes, and quite naturally :))) - Many thanks for your visit and comment, dear Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

CayCay Godwin January 6, 2019 at 2:53 PM I don't know what to say because none of my response-thoughts have landed yet! Love where you took the theme, the creative way you delivered it and how, ultimately, you filled the air with amusement. This took me here, there and everywhere on an off-the-wall excursion I thoroughly enjoyed. CayCay Anne-Lise Andresen January 6, 2019 at 11:46 PM - Interesting ... thank you very much, CayCay :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven January 6, 2019 at 12:03 PM Hi Anne-Lise, another excellent write from your pen. I loved the content and the ending was priceless. I almost fell off he chair laughing. It was unexpected. those are usually the best laughs though. Good luck in the contest Anne-Lise, reads like a winner to me. Have a wonderful Sunday evening. Hugs....Mike. XX Anne-Lise Andresen January 6, 2019 at 2:00 PM - Many thanks for your comment and laughter, my friend Mike :) - Laughter is good medicine :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Inman January 6, 2019 at 10:23 AM Clever. Anne-Lise Andresen January 6, 2019 at 1:58 PM - Many thanks, James :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Frederic Parker January 5, 2019 at 7:50 AM well played dear poet I was not expecting such an ending...very funny Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2019 at 2:54 PM - Of course you didn't expect it, Frederic :))) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One January 5, 2019 at 6:11 AM Lol.. Nice to see your funny side.. Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2019 at 2:51 PM - Glad you liked it S.O., many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso January 5, 2019 at 1:11 AM Ok Anne-Lise you got me here! I was not expecting this, but I am so smiling now!!!! Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2019 at 2:50 PM - Many thanks for your comment and smile, Arthur :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos January 4, 2019 at 9:43 PM The last line takes the cake Sunshine Smile, love your poem! Such a beautiful build up that leads to such a natural reflex! Kudos! Good luck my friend, Jennifer. Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2019 at 2:49 PM - Many thanks, Jennifer :) - Glad you enjoy it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands January 4, 2019 at 4:43 PM LOL Funny Ann-Lise. Well done! Anne-Lise Andresen January 4, 2019 at 6:33 PM - Many thanks for your comment and smile, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y. January 4, 2019 at 4:13 PM Lol! Anne- Lise, The photo worked with your entry! I wish you the best luck in the contest:-)Alexis Anne-Lise Andresen January 4, 2019 at 6:32 PM - Many thanks, Alexis :) - Glad you enjoy it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert L. Hinshaw January 4, 2019 at 3:25 PM Love this one, Anne Lise, especially the last line. I expect to see this one at the top of the winner's list. Many thanks for your kind comment about poor plumber Mr Leaks! - Bob Anne-Lise Andresen January 4, 2019 at 4:02 PM - No matter win or not ... fun to write, Bob :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham January 4, 2019 at 3:09 PM Haha, wouldn't like to be around when the big one comes. Tom. Anne-Lise Andresen January 4, 2019 at 4:00 PM - Neither do I :))) - Many thanks, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arturo Michael January 4, 2019 at 3:07 PM Indeed a small one...for unimaginable disasters would have occurred if explode completely...a light gaseous one...All the best Anne-Lise Anne-Lise Andresen January 4, 2019 at 3:59 PM - Many thanks, Arturo :) - Watch out for gas emissions :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud January 4, 2019 at 3:03 PM what a surprise in your last line.. this is a beauty, anne... happy huggs Anne-Lise Andresen January 4, 2019 at 3:57 PM - Many thanks, Nette :) - Glad you enjoy it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)