Unforgettable

You are unforgettable 
never alone
No distance to far
a screen prayer or phone

You’ve always been strong 
I know by what I’ve read
It doesn’t matter
those things he’s said

Watch him walk away
let that little man go
Your true stronger self
will surely grow

Please don’t call 
resist to follow
his words of pain
are not yours to swallow

In the sheets of rain 
a dying flame 
As he walks slowly away
forget his name

The night is wet and cold
I can feel you shake
Going through pain
is not a mistake

Suffering’s not forever
a new flame will ignite
Like the Phoenix
you will take flight

For you are unforgettable 
never truly alone
Reach across the distance
by screen prayer or by phone


A response to Casarah Nance’s poem “Find Me Forgotten”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 3/21/2020 6:57:00 AM
Lovely and reassuring. The one who can call you friend is truly blessed.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/21/2020 8:29:00 AM
You can. Hugs Rick
Date: 11/18/2019 11:02:00 AM
Powerful message of support. Congrats on your POTD, Richard.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/31/2019 5:35:00 PM
Thanks Line.
Date: 11/4/2019 7:06:00 AM
This is truly wonderful. Beautifully done!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/4/2019 7:49:00 AM
Thanks Caren. ;0)
Date: 11/1/2019 10:57:00 AM
This is such an incredibly empathetic poem, Richard. How could it NOT have been POTD?! That's my only question. Bravo. A FAVE for me. Warmest wishes, Gershon
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/4/2019 7:49:00 AM
You are kind Gershon.
Date: 10/30/2019 1:49:00 AM
Was t it may king cold who sang unforgettable? Well this would give his a run for his money Rick lol I do love your writings!;)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/3/2019 4:51:00 AM
Ahh see I missed this potd! Congrats my friend!;)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/30/2019 7:55:00 AM
Thanks Brenda, your visits are appreciated. Hugs Rick.
Date: 10/29/2019 6:52:00 PM
A well deserved POTD and message in this great write. Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/30/2019 7:56:00 AM
What a nice surprise. Hugs Rick.
Date: 10/27/2019 12:08:00 PM
another one with recognition, and so well deserved your POTD on this, Richard!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/27/2019 2:35:00 PM
Thanks again Andrea.
Date: 10/27/2019 9:08:00 AM
Truth, like the Phoenix, shines here in a captivating poem. Congrats on your POTD Richard.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/27/2019 2:36:00 PM
Thanks Jeanne. Much appreciated.
Date: 10/25/2019 9:39:00 PM
Belated Congratulations on poem of the day, Richard!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/27/2019 2:37:00 PM
Thanks HT. Blessings Rick.
Date: 10/24/2019 6:12:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Richard!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/25/2019 8:41:00 AM
Thanks Kim.
Date: 10/20/2019 11:07:00 AM
Hi Richard, You have penned such a good response to Casarah's poem. Congratulations on the poem of day:-) Alexis
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/27/2019 2:37:00 PM
Thanks Alexis. ;0)
Date: 10/20/2019 7:35:00 AM
This is so beautiful Richard and truly something many people need to hear because of a bad relationship they live with. Love this. Going into my faves. God Bless, JB
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/20/2019 9:15:00 AM
Aww thanks Judy.
Date: 10/20/2019 1:47:00 AM
'I Can hear music' A respond, and highly inspirational poem, Richard, love this..
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/20/2019 9:16:00 AM
Thanks Harry.
Date: 10/19/2019 8:53:00 AM
Thanks to all for the overwhelming response. I will drop by to read your gifts.
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Date: 10/19/2019 8:22:00 AM
This is great, Richard. Congratulations on POTD. Charlie
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Date: 10/19/2019 3:20:00 AM
Ah, this one hit home Richard, Your words have never been more effective. Congrats on your POTD xo
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Date: 10/18/2019 9:02:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD , a nicely penned encouraging poem!
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Date: 10/18/2019 7:13:00 PM
"You are unforgettable" These three words should always touch the heart. This is beautiful and tender- holding so many emotions. As I am reading your words- "Unforgettable" is playing in the background. Truly sets the mood. Deep sigh. Congratulations Richard, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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Date: 10/18/2019 5:47:00 PM
I will have to read the inspired poem, but Richard I love the sonorous sounds and half rhymes in yours. This is a nice poem. I hope the intended appreciates your poetics.
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Date: 10/18/2019 5:31:00 PM
Some meaningful words Richard. Congratulations on your well deserved POTD! xxoo
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Date: 10/18/2019 4:02:00 PM
Hi, Richard. Long time no see) Congrats on POTD. If this poem doesn't deserve it, what does?
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Date: 10/18/2019 3:35:00 PM
Richard, congratulations on POTD. It is well deserved. Best wishes~ Warren
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Date: 10/18/2019 3:31:00 PM
A great piece of work Richard, fully deserving the POTD, well done. Have a great weekend, Gordon
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Date: 10/18/2019 2:52:00 PM
This is inspiring and I bet a lot of people can relate to this.
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Date: 10/18/2019 12:54:00 PM
Hello, Richard! So happy for you! Big Congratulations Woo- Hoo. Panagiota xx
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