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Unforgettable

You are unforgettable never alone No distance to far a screen prayer or phone You’ve always been strong I know by what I’ve read It doesn’t matter those things he’s said Watch him walk away let that little man go Your true stronger self will surely grow Please don’t call resist to follow his words of pain are not yours to swallow In the sheets of rain a dying flame As he walks slowly away forget his name The night is wet and cold I can feel you shake Going through pain is not a mistake Suffering’s not forever a new flame will ignite Like the Phoenix you will take flight For you are unforgettable never truly alone Reach across the distance by screen prayer or by phone A response to Casarah Nance’s poem “Find Me Forgotten”

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Date: 3/21/2020 6:57:00 AM
Lovely and reassuring. The one who can call you friend is truly blessed.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/21/2020 8:29:00 AM
You can. Hugs Rick
Date: 11/18/2019 11:02:00 AM
Powerful message of support. Congrats on your POTD, Richard.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/31/2019 5:35:00 PM
Thanks Line.
Date: 11/4/2019 7:06:00 AM
This is truly wonderful. Beautifully done!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/4/2019 7:49:00 AM
Thanks Caren. ;0)
Date: 11/1/2019 10:57:00 AM
This is such an incredibly empathetic poem, Richard. How could it NOT have been POTD?! That's my only question. Bravo. A FAVE for me. Warmest wishes, Gershon
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/4/2019 7:49:00 AM
You are kind Gershon.
Date: 10/30/2019 1:49:00 AM
Was t it may king cold who sang unforgettable? Well this would give his a run for his money Rick lol I do love your writings!;)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/3/2019 4:51:00 AM
Ahh see I missed this potd! Congrats my friend!;)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/30/2019 7:55:00 AM
Thanks Brenda, your visits are appreciated. Hugs Rick.
Date: 10/29/2019 6:52:00 PM
A well deserved POTD and message in this great write. Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/30/2019 7:56:00 AM
What a nice surprise. Hugs Rick.
Date: 10/27/2019 12:08:00 PM
another one with recognition, and so well deserved your POTD on this, Richard!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/27/2019 2:35:00 PM
Thanks again Andrea.
Date: 10/27/2019 9:08:00 AM
Truth, like the Phoenix, shines here in a captivating poem. Congrats on your POTD Richard.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/27/2019 2:36:00 PM
Thanks Jeanne. Much appreciated.
Date: 10/25/2019 9:39:00 PM
Belated Congratulations on poem of the day, Richard!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/27/2019 2:37:00 PM
Thanks HT. Blessings Rick.
Date: 10/24/2019 6:12:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Richard!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/25/2019 8:41:00 AM
Thanks Kim.
Date: 10/20/2019 11:07:00 AM
Hi Richard, You have penned such a good response to Casarah's poem. Congratulations on the poem of day:-) Alexis
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/27/2019 2:37:00 PM
Thanks Alexis. ;0)
Date: 10/20/2019 7:35:00 AM
This is so beautiful Richard and truly something many people need to hear because of a bad relationship they live with. Love this. Going into my faves. God Bless, JB
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/20/2019 9:15:00 AM
Aww thanks Judy.
Date: 10/20/2019 1:47:00 AM
'I Can hear music' A respond, and highly inspirational poem, Richard, love this..
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/20/2019 9:16:00 AM
Thanks Harry.
Date: 10/19/2019 8:53:00 AM
Thanks to all for the overwhelming response. I will drop by to read your gifts.
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Date: 10/19/2019 8:22:00 AM
This is great, Richard. Congratulations on POTD. Charlie
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Date: 10/19/2019 3:20:00 AM
Ah, this one hit home Richard, Your words have never been more effective. Congrats on your POTD xo
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Date: 10/18/2019 9:02:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD , a nicely penned encouraging poem!
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Date: 10/18/2019 7:13:00 PM
"You are unforgettable" These three words should always touch the heart. This is beautiful and tender- holding so many emotions. As I am reading your words- "Unforgettable" is playing in the background. Truly sets the mood. Deep sigh. Congratulations Richard, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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Date: 10/18/2019 5:47:00 PM
I will have to read the inspired poem, but Richard I love the sonorous sounds and half rhymes in yours. This is a nice poem. I hope the intended appreciates your poetics.
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Date: 10/18/2019 5:31:00 PM
Some meaningful words Richard. Congratulations on your well deserved POTD! xxoo
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Date: 10/18/2019 4:02:00 PM
Hi, Richard. Long time no see) Congrats on POTD. If this poem doesn't deserve it, what does?
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Date: 10/18/2019 3:35:00 PM
Richard, congratulations on POTD. It is well deserved. Best wishes~ Warren
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Date: 10/18/2019 3:31:00 PM
A great piece of work Richard, fully deserving the POTD, well done. Have a great weekend, Gordon
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Date: 10/18/2019 2:52:00 PM
This is inspiring and I bet a lot of people can relate to this.
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Date: 10/18/2019 12:54:00 PM
Hello, Richard! So happy for you! Big Congratulations Woo- Hoo. Panagiota xx
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