Unfold Your Words

Unfold 
Be bold 
You told 
Behold 
Unfold us your words, write on...be bold 
Your words, that you told, our hearts...behold

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Lonna Blodgett

Date: 8/15/2019 10:59:00 AM

This is a very fun and amusing expression in its format. Your example sets the path and is a good read. Thanks for the new challenge. Lonna

Anisha Dutta

Date: 8/11/2019 12:41:00 AM

VERY NICE. 'll try.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 8/10/2019 10:17:00 PM

As Andrea said below, I've never heard of this form but I'm willing to jump in. First, I have to uncross my eyes after unsuccessfully attempting to figure out where you repeated words in your last two lines. Enjoyed your Tyburn and truly yearn to write something as unique as your Tyburn doth speak. My brain and I thank you, Charles! (does anything rhyme with Charles? Oh, the places my mind goes) All the best ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/8/2019 7:08:00 PM

I think it's great that you provide opportunities for members to show forms like this. Few poets know this form. Well done, Charles.

Sandra Adams

Date: 8/7/2019 8:58:00 AM

good example given for the form, i like the flow of yours...:) hugs

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/6/2019 5:54:00 PM

Nice example for the contest. Thanks, my friend.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/6/2019 5:28:00 PM

gosh you have set us a challenge I don't think I've written this form before, will see if my muse is willing:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 8/5/2019 9:47:00 PM

Hi Charlie, great example for your contest, I will give it a whirl !

M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/5/2019 8:53:00 PM

I have never tried one of these but, I salute you for a great one.

Beata Agustin

Date: 8/5/2019 8:00:00 PM

Wow! Thanks for this piece that exemplifies what your contest requires. Thanks likewise for hosting challenges toward "poetic growth" that I'm experiencing; likewise for my placements. God bless you.