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Example for my contest :)

Unfold Your Words

Unfold 
Be bold 
You told 
Behold 
Unfold us your words, write on...be bold 
Your words, that you told, our hearts...behold
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Blodgett Avatar
August 15, 2019 at 10:59 AM
This is a very fun and amusing expression in its format. Your example sets the path and is a good read. Thanks for the new challenge. Lonna
Dutta Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 12:41 AM
VERY NICE. 'll try.
Godwin Avatar
August 10, 2019 at 10:17 PM
As Andrea said below, I've never heard of this form but I'm willing to jump in. First, I have to uncross my eyes after unsuccessfully attempting to figure out where you repeated words in your last two lines. Enjoyed your Tyburn and truly yearn to write something as unique as your Tyburn doth speak. My brain and I thank you, Charles! (does anything rhyme with Charles? Oh, the places my mind goes) All the best ... CayCay
Dietrich Avatar
August 8, 2019 at 7:08 PM
I think it's great that you provide opportunities for members to show forms like this. Few poets know this form. Well done, Charles.
Adams Avatar
August 7, 2019 at 8:58 AM
good example given for the form, i like the flow of yours...:) hugs
Wolf Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 5:54 PM
Nice example for the contest. Thanks, my friend.
Allison Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 5:28 PM
gosh you have set us a challenge I don't think I've written this form before, will see if my muse is willing:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 9:47 PM
Hi Charlie, great example for your contest, I will give it a whirl !
Kiser Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 8:53 PM
I have never tried one of these but, I salute you for a great one.
Agustin Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 8:00 PM
Wow! Thanks for this piece that exemplifies what your contest requires. Thanks likewise for hosting challenges toward "poetic growth" that I'm experiencing; likewise for my placements. God bless you.
Daniel Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 8:53 AM
Great example and encouraging too, Charles:)
Andresen Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 4:55 AM
- A great example, Charlie ... I have to look at your contest :) - Have a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Blown Avatar
August 4, 2019 at 10:56 PM
mmmhahahaaaa...'nicewriteshortandtothepoint...unfoldt that one dimension and words...will enter here
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