White Wolf Poet Sonnet

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Unfold My Heart:

I think too many thoughts before I say
the words revealing deepest inner thoughts, 
Abandoned heart, to ever feel this way, 
A ship so lost at sea without a port. 

Wishing my days were with you evermore, 
The scent of your hair lingers about me, 
Reminding me, were I the man you saw? 
I ask myself. For I am blind, can't see.
 
I lose myself in love we once possessed, 
Keep finding you in dreams too late at night, 
And how could I be seen, be manifest? 
This darkness following sheds too dim light. 

Pleasure or pain which one will I now gain? 
Unfold our story, love, for you remain.

4~May~2017

(Ten syllables per line)

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Connie Marcum Wong May 15, 2017 at 8:01 AM I sense a bit of hope in this piece WW. Congratulations on your win! Love the pictures of the wolves. My daughter has an Alaskan dog that looks much like them. 7 ; )

Kim Rodrigues May 8, 2017 at 7:33 AM Lovely and sad. Congrats on a fine win, WW!! White Wolf May 8, 2017 at 8:04 AM Thank you very much, Kim /|\

Darren White May 8, 2017 at 6:45 AM Congratulations my friend!!!! White Wolf May 8, 2017 at 6:47 AM Haha, thanks mate /|\

Sandra Haight May 7, 2017 at 7:01 PM A lovely, heartfelt Sonnet, White Wolf. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Sandra White Wolf May 7, 2017 at 7:42 PM Thank you very much, it was most unexpected /|\

Winged Warrior May 6, 2017 at 1:29 PM A brilliant sonnet my friend...like the pic too...all the best and congrats!!! on win...^WW^ White Wolf May 7, 2017 at 7:41 PM Thank you kindly, ^WW^! /|\

Anisha Dutta May 6, 2017 at 12:51 PM Congrats to win on this wonderful sonnet. Enjoyed much. White Wolf May 7, 2017 at 7:41 PM Thank you very much, Anisha /|\

John Herlihy May 6, 2017 at 2:04 AM Perfect, everything is unexpected, leaving us wanting more. Is it only a sonnet? I guess tomorrow is another day. John White Wolf May 7, 2017 at 7:40 PM Haha, yes, it is! Thanks, John /|\

Heidi Sands May 4, 2017 at 11:30 AM This is excellent . Expressed so well :) White Wolf May 4, 2017 at 7:04 PM Thank you for your kind words, Heidi /|\

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 4, 2017 at 6:49 AM This tugs at the heart strings. 7 from me. Best of luck in the contest. White Wolf May 4, 2017 at 6:52 AM It is purely fictional! I am in love with the concept of love only! It is more of a metaphor this one! Thank you /|\

Darren White May 4, 2017 at 6:17 AM Wonderful Budgie! Wishing you good luck in the contest! Darren White May 4, 2017 at 6:36 AM Always :) White Wolf May 4, 2017 at 6:20 AM I know you do! Thanks, Duir, for everything mate /|\

Chris Green May 4, 2017 at 6:16 AM Such a deep and emotive piece my friend. This one touches me deeply. Really nicely done. White Wolf May 4, 2017 at 6:18 AM Yes, I must admit, I had a little penguin help on this one, Haha! Thanks, Chris /|\

Demetrios Trifiatis May 4, 2017 at 2:02 AM My good friend, WW, steadily you are mastering all forms of poetry fact that shows you are a born poet my friend! Excellent Sonnet. A 7+ White Wolf May 4, 2017 at 2:05 AM What a lovely thing to say, Demetrios! One day perhaps my friend! It's the practicing that's the fun part! Thank you /|\