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I think too many thoughts before I say the words revealing deepest inner thoughts, Abandoned heart, to ever feel this way, A ship so lost at sea without a port. Wishing my days were with you evermore, The scent of your hair lingers about me, Reminding me, were I the man you saw? I ask myself. For I am blind, can't see. I lose myself in love we once possessed, Keep finding you in dreams too late at night, And how could I be seen, be manifest? This darkness following sheds too dim light. Pleasure or pain which one will I now gain? Unfold our story, love, for you remain.
4~May~2017 (Ten syllables per line)

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Date: 5/15/2017 8:01:00 AM
I sense a bit of hope in this piece WW. Congratulations on your win! Love the pictures of the wolves. My daughter has an Alaskan dog that looks much like them. 7 ; )
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Date: 5/8/2017 7:33:00 AM
Lovely and sad. Congrats on a fine win, WW!!
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White Wolf
Date: 5/8/2017 8:04:00 AM
Thank you very much, Kim /|\
Date: 5/8/2017 6:45:00 AM
Congratulations my friend!!!!
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White Wolf
Date: 5/8/2017 6:47:00 AM
Haha, thanks mate /|\
Date: 5/7/2017 7:01:00 PM
A lovely, heartfelt Sonnet, White Wolf. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Sandra
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White Wolf
Date: 5/7/2017 7:42:00 PM
Thank you very much, it was most unexpected /|\
Date: 5/6/2017 1:29:00 PM
A brilliant sonnet my friend...like the pic too...all the best and congrats!!! on win...^WW^
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White Wolf
Date: 5/7/2017 7:41:00 PM
Thank you kindly, ^WW^! /|\
Date: 5/6/2017 12:51:00 PM
Congrats to win on this wonderful sonnet. Enjoyed much.
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White Wolf
Date: 5/7/2017 7:41:00 PM
Thank you very much, Anisha /|\
Date: 5/6/2017 2:04:00 AM
Perfect, everything is unexpected, leaving us wanting more. Is it only a sonnet? I guess tomorrow is another day. John
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White Wolf
Date: 5/7/2017 7:40:00 PM
Haha, yes, it is! Thanks, John /|\
Date: 5/4/2017 11:30:00 AM
This is excellent . Expressed so well :)
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White Wolf
Date: 5/4/2017 7:04:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Heidi /|\
Date: 5/4/2017 6:49:00 AM
This tugs at the heart strings. 7 from me. Best of luck in the contest.
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White Wolf
Date: 5/4/2017 6:52:00 AM
It is purely fictional! I am in love with the concept of love only! It is more of a metaphor this one! Thank you /|\
Date: 5/4/2017 6:17:00 AM
Wonderful Budgie! Wishing you good luck in the contest!
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Darren White
Date: 5/4/2017 6:36:00 AM
Always :)
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White Wolf
Date: 5/4/2017 6:20:00 AM
I know you do! Thanks, Duir, for everything mate /|\
Date: 5/4/2017 6:16:00 AM
Such a deep and emotive piece my friend. This one touches me deeply. Really nicely done.
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White Wolf
Date: 5/4/2017 6:18:00 AM
Yes, I must admit, I had a little penguin help on this one, Haha! Thanks, Chris /|\
Date: 5/4/2017 2:02:00 AM
My good friend, WW, steadily you are mastering all forms of poetry fact that shows you are a born poet my friend! Excellent Sonnet. A 7+
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White Wolf
Date: 5/4/2017 2:05:00 AM
What a lovely thing to say, Demetrios! One day perhaps my friend! It's the practicing that's the fun part! Thank you /|\

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