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Unfold

unfold
a rose petal by petal
till nothing remains
only the heart can beat
and shine so rosy gold

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/11/2016 4:23:00 PM
Lovely tanka!
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Date: 4/11/2016 2:56:00 PM
very nice, Martin. I looked at the PM poetry list and had to see your right away!
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