Unfold

unfold
a rose petal by petal
till nothing remains
only the heart can beat
and shine so rosy gold
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Chircop Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 4:23 PM
Lovely tanka!
Dietrich Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 2:56 PM
very nice, Martin. I looked at the PM poetry list and had to see your right away!
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