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Our land of stars and stripes, now glows, with screens that flicker in hallowed halls. Entranced humans shuffle, with eyes fixed below, on small gadgets that have us enthralled. Should the Statue of Liberty, our symbolic girl, be holding a smartphone up to the world? While tweets fly like eagles and hashtags swirl, foreign disinformation trends as fast as it’s purled. In lunch halls, real conversations take rest, as influence is sought—in hoity-toity, binary quest. Friends are backdrops—originality in short supply as likes and shares make our dopamine fly. America’s zombies, though *********** drained, shuffle endlessly on, with Wi-Fi stimulated brains. Once the land of the free, we’re now the land of tech with minds wrecked by truths unchecked. As we rock and sway—the new robot way— will our old, analog-republic simply fade away? . . Songs for this: Airhead by Thomas Dolby . Oh, and a Christmas playlist because—it’s December: daweb.us/xmas/Christmas_01.mp3

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Date: 12/4/2024 11:41:00 AM
Your poem makes me so happy that I had the chance to experience life without technology Anais, of course I grasp it now and it’s part of my everyday life, love the imagery of the statue of liberty holding a smartphone up, (probably taking a selfie), hey we still have fully autonomous AI to look forward to, this one reminds me of the movie (Surrogates) cheers David
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Date: 12/4/2024 6:00:00 PM
I was lucky, my parents forbid social media when I was growing up - I did have this crazy habit of posting poetry though. =]

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