Debjani Mitra Poet Senryu

Unfinished Poem

molten gold eyes blaze
herald tender bruise on lips...
unfinished poem






Date written.. 18th March 2019
Contest... Writing challenge 3 March 2019  Senryu 
Sponsor.. Dear Heart.

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Eve Roper March 20, 2019 at 6:53 PM Debjani, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*

Constance La France March 20, 2019 at 5:00 PM Debjani, congratulations on your win in my contest with this fine Senryu ~

Anne-Lise Andresen March 20, 2019 at 2:37 PM - Congratulations on your great win, Debjani :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich March 19, 2019 at 6:34 PM I quite like this one, if it's what i am thinking it means! Debjani Mitra March 19, 2019 at 10:19 PM Please convey.. Its so exciting when the reader thinks something different from that of the poet