Unfinished Poem-2

Wanton words or bits of paper
Flotsam and jetsam or progenitors
Damp squibs or ticking time bombs
Collect..and recollect
Their golden worth, silverfish and all
Revived or transmigrated
To touch earth’s core and zodiac zones
To recreate vibes syncing with a smart sun
On pretty turf bearing its sweet burden
Of coy blooms or breeze bushed
On mornings lying about in yards like spilt milk
Words that wouldn’t miss the woods for the tree
Moving  along paths, straight or wavy
Slicing through sheer life
Leaving left and right little islands
Of sunshine or sombre nights,
Bristling,though, with rain on fresh page
The epic stage for an unfinished call
Once left reticulated with a dumb aridity.







For Carol Brown's 'Pieces of paper..A poet's heart'

By: S.Jagathsimhan nair,   14 sept 11

No.1 in the above contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Merryman Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 9:04 PM
Congrats on your win in PD's contest, Jag! Love, Kim
Brown Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 6:21 AM
A belated congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest Jag. Love, Carol
Quigley Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 8:41 AM
Congratulations on your win
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 8:09 PM
Congrats on your wonderful win! Blessings, Rhonda
Sweetheart Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 8:07 PM
congrats Jag on an eloquent write3 and win luv.. first place winner for sure..
Taylor Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 9:30 AM
Congrats, SJ. Awesome write. Nice going. Ralph
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March 4, 2012 at 7:00 PM
jag .congratulations! in my contest...muched enjoyed your entry,;-) always*PD
Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2011 at 8:11 PM
wow, so much imagery on this one, S. and I see you won the contest with it.Congratulations.
Song Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 3:07 AM
Congrats on this fine winning piece, poet. You have penned exactly how I feel when faced with writing. You have a similar writing style to Nette in this entry and it is divine. Again, congrats. Gwendolen
Taylor Avatar
September 19, 2011 at 10:41 PM
Congrats on 1st Place, Jag. Nice going. Ralph
Ramage Avatar
September 19, 2011 at 12:37 PM
This is such a neat poem, I am learning from your skill. Again, an honour to share the first place position with so many skilled poets. Congratulations on your first place win. Lee
Sweetheart Avatar
September 19, 2011 at 10:41 AM
CONGRATS JAG ON A GREAT FIRST PLACE WIN WITH WONDERFUL WORDS LUV..
Johnson Avatar
September 19, 2011 at 9:26 AM
Cleverly woven into a rare delight. congratulations. Love, Joyce
Brown Avatar
September 19, 2011 at 7:42 AM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Jag. Love, Carol
Wesley Avatar
September 13, 2011 at 9:48 PM
All the feelings and emotions as we travel through life are described in this great verse Jag. Love how you take the descriptions above the acctual way of it.
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