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Unfinished Melody

Days spent
limping down
piano keys
and knocking 
on cellos

covering my body
with the sheet musics
he left

convinsing myself
a tune is ment
for me
somewhere

played lonely and soft
like Gymnopedie No 1
embracing 
a leftover summer night. 


© Gry W Christensen

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Gary Bateman

Date: 10/10/2014 5:35:00 PM

Gry . . . An "unfinished melody" but still quite marvelous and a most deserved "7" from me. An entrancing piece highlighted a poetic economy of words, but arranged properly to highlight the key images of your work. Superb Job Gry!! Cheers, Gary

Gry Christensen
Date: 10/19/2014 7:36:00 PM

Hi Gary, Thank you so very much for your nice and profound feedback. Yes, I think tend to be Ebenezer Scrooge with words sometimes. All the best, Gry

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/10/2014 12:14:00 PM

thumbs up beautiful piece

Gry Christensen
Date: 10/19/2014 7:18:00 PM

Hi Liam, thank you so much for your nice comment! I truly appreciate it. :) All the best, Gry

Robert Lindley

Date: 10/9/2014 10:52:00 PM

"played lonely and soft like Gymnopedie No 1 embracing a leftover summer night. " Poetic gold my friend.. Your pen sings a fine song!! Another 7 from me..

Gry Christensen
Date: 10/9/2014 11:35:00 PM

Many thanks, Robert. You spoil me with your kind words. :) All the best,Gry