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Unfinished Melody

Days spent limping down piano keys and knocking on cellos covering my body with the sheet musics he left convinsing myself a tune is ment for me somewhere played lonely and soft like Gymnopedie No 1 embracing a leftover summer night. © Gry W Christensen

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Gary Bateman

Date: 10/10/2014 5:35:00 PM

Gry . . . An "unfinished melody" but still quite marvelous and a most deserved "7" from me. An entrancing piece highlighted a poetic economy of words, but arranged properly to highlight the key images of your work. Superb Job Gry!! Cheers, Gary

Gry Christensen
Date: 10/19/2014 7:36:00 PM

Hi Gary, Thank you so very much for your nice and profound feedback. Yes, I think tend to be Ebenezer Scrooge with words sometimes. All the best, Gry

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/10/2014 12:14:00 PM

thumbs up beautiful piece

Gry Christensen
Date: 10/19/2014 7:18:00 PM

Hi Liam, thank you so much for your nice comment! I truly appreciate it. :) All the best, Gry

Robert Lindley

Date: 10/9/2014 10:52:00 PM

"played lonely and soft like Gymnopedie No 1 embracing a leftover summer night. " Poetic gold my friend.. Your pen sings a fine song!! Another 7 from me..

Gry Christensen
Date: 10/9/2014 11:35:00 PM

Many thanks, Robert. You spoil me with your kind words. :) All the best,Gry

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/9/2014 10:43:00 PM

Convincing myself a tune is meant for me somewhere....this line spoke to me most. So steep in longing. Lovely write.

Gry Christensen
Date: 10/9/2014 11:33:00 PM

Hello Eileen, thank you so much for reading and you kind feedback. All the best, Gry

Skat A

Date: 10/7/2014 12:47:00 PM

Gry, awesome poem Enjoy your day, Love ~SKAT~

Gry Christensen
Date: 10/9/2014 3:11:00 PM

Hey Skat A, Many thanks for your kind comment and time spent reading. All the best, Gry

Hina Nasir

Date: 10/7/2014 3:55:00 AM

LIKED! BLEW!

Gry Christensen
Date: 10/9/2014 3:10:00 PM

Hello Hina, thanks a lot for reading and liking it. It makes me happy to hear. All the best, Gry