Gry Christensen Poet Free verse

Unfinished Melody

Days spent
limping down
piano keys
and knocking 
on cellos

covering my body
with the sheet musics
he left

convinsing myself
a tune is ment
for me
somewhere

played lonely and soft
like Gymnopedie No 1
embracing 
a leftover summer night. 


© Gry W Christensen

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Gary Bateman October 10, 2014 at 5:35 PM Gry . . . An "unfinished melody" but still quite marvelous and a most deserved "7" from me. An entrancing piece highlighted a poetic economy of words, but arranged properly to highlight the key images of your work. Superb Job Gry!! Cheers, Gary Gry Christensen October 19, 2014 at 7:36 PM Hi Gary, Thank you so very much for your nice and profound feedback. Yes, I think tend to be Ebenezer Scrooge with words sometimes. All the best, Gry

Liam Mcdaid October 10, 2014 at 12:14 PM thumbs up beautiful piece Gry Christensen October 19, 2014 at 7:18 PM Hi Liam, thank you so much for your nice comment! I truly appreciate it. :) All the best, Gry

Robert Lindley October 9, 2014 at 10:52 PM "played lonely and soft like Gymnopedie No 1 embracing a leftover summer night. " Poetic gold my friend.. Your pen sings a fine song!! Another 7 from me.. Gry Christensen October 9, 2014 at 11:35 PM Many thanks, Robert. You spoil me with your kind words. :) All the best,Gry

Eileen Manassian October 9, 2014 at 10:43 PM Convincing myself a tune is meant for me somewhere....this line spoke to me most. So steep in longing. Lovely write. Gry Christensen October 9, 2014 at 11:33 PM Hello Eileen, thank you so much for reading and you kind feedback. All the best, Gry

Skat A October 7, 2014 at 12:47 PM Gry, awesome poem Enjoy your day, Love ~SKAT~ Gry Christensen October 9, 2014 at 3:11 PM Hey Skat A, Many thanks for your kind comment and time spent reading. All the best, Gry

Hina Nasir October 7, 2014 at 3:55 AM LIKED! BLEW! Gry Christensen October 9, 2014 at 3:10 PM Hello Hina, thanks a lot for reading and liking it. It makes me happy to hear. All the best, Gry