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Unfinished

Daisy was a dog owner’s delight
She never fought and didn’t bite.
But she ate some bad food
Putting her in a mean mood.
The result is too tragic to write.

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Funom Makama

May 28, 2015 at 10:44 AM

Great lines with majestic eloquence.. Your meandering of words still did not prevent your peice from giving out its message. This is an absolute 7!

Paul Schneiter

May 28, 2015 at 6:30 PM

Funom, please know I couldn't be more grateful for your kind, encouraging words. Thank you for your support and for taking time to write. I hope all is well with you and your loved ones.

Jan Allison

May 21, 2015 at 11:09 AM

aww - good but sad - Paul you need to enter the limerick contest - do check it out and see if you can come up with a cracker:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Schneiter

May 22, 2015 at 11:40 PM

Jan, as ever and always, thank you. I took your counsel and entered Catie's L&H limerick contest. Then, I looked at my entry 12 hours later and deleted it. Ugh, it was awful. Maybe I'll make a second run at it, Catie/rules permitting.

Tim Smith

May 21, 2015 at 10:42 AM

good one Paul

Tim Smith

May 28, 2015 at 6:42 PM

I'm at the baseball fields....I'll come up with something later : )

Paul Schneiter

May 28, 2015 at 6:39 PM

Thanks, Tim. I want you to know I'm looking forward to reading your limerick about onion breath. As I mentioned earlier, I'm confident--in your gifted hands--that will have the makings of a classic.

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