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UNFINISHED

December exhales, cold, unfinished~ dragging its shadows like a half-empty suitcase filled with heavy promises. I stand knee-deep in what I didn’t say~ the clock’s hands trembling with the weight of all I meant to become.
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Gauthier Avatar
January 2, 2026 at 1:39 PM
Beautifully expressed ~ so relatable
Wolf Avatar
December 28, 2025 at 7:52 PM
Profound ruminations, Sara. C'mon, Sara. Three whole days left to 'kick that bucket list.' lol. Happy Next Year, gw
Parker Avatar
December 28, 2025 at 3:18 PM
I've always meant to just live, so I wear boots for what I have never said. interesting poem
Bayles Avatar
December 28, 2025 at 10:54 AM
Haunting poem, Sara.
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