Debbie Guzzi Poet Etheree

Unfettered

Fly
leave life’s
unbound web.
Let tatters stream
upon time's wind rise.
Bring sustenance to grow
with wanderers wonder ride.
Upon wind, water, fire or earth
remove the shell, pod, the placenta 
rebirth upon the graves of fettered time.

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Carol Sunshine Brown June 21, 2010 at 7:05 AM Congratulations on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest "Etheree Me" Deb. Love, Carol

Iolanda Scripca June 20, 2010 at 8:24 PM Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Iolanda

Joseph Spence Sr June 20, 2010 at 7:27 PM I love the natural flow of this poem. The rebirth of unfettered time is just awesome. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Blessings, Joseph

Joyce Johnson June 20, 2010 at 7:06 PM A beautiful poem. congratulations on your hm

Amy Green June 20, 2010 at 9:47 AM A lot more to this poem than the physical eye beholds. An excellent write... thought provoking. Congrats.

Andrea Dietrich June 20, 2010 at 4:12 AM Congratulations on your HM in my contest, Deb. I loved those lines about the wonder ride, removing shell, pod and placenta! Luv, Andrea

De R June 13, 2010 at 11:14 AM This is a wonderful Etheree..captured me from the start...beautiful writing! Kisses, Emily

Kabuteng P.Ink K. June 12, 2010 at 6:29 AM A very intriguing etheree, and I especially enjoyed your sprinkling of alliteration, too! --nikko :)

Raul Moreno June 9, 2010 at 1:49 PM The last 3 lines conclude this nice poem. The title is fitting, nice work...Raul

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen June 8, 2010 at 12:19 PM Nice Etheree, Deborah. Good luck in the contest with this meaningful write. Love, Dane

Sara Kendrick June 8, 2010 at 12:01 PM Interesting thooughts that you have penned in this one...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown June 8, 2010 at 6:13 AM A contest winner it looks to be. Wishing you the best should you enter it. Have a beautiful day Deb. Love, Carol

Harry Horsman June 8, 2010 at 12:40 AM awesome awesome this is so full of feeling harry

Margaret Foster June 7, 2010 at 7:48 PM I like this one Deborah. Good luck be yours...cheers Margaret

Doris Culverhouse June 7, 2010 at 5:59 PM great write, enjoyed today!!

Dr.Ram Mehta June 7, 2010 at 5:55 PM Nice Etheree with intermittant alliteration apt images. I enjoyed it, Deborah

Poet Destroyer A June 7, 2010 at 5:08 PM Good day D.G.,Nice on the etheree, I've been seeing a lot of these today. Contest or what. Which ever it is enjoyed,..p.d.

Skat A June 7, 2010 at 5:08 PM NICE ETHEREE -IRMA