Unfettered

Fly
leave life’s
unbound web.
Let tatters stream
upon time's wind rise.
Bring sustenance to grow
with wanderers wonder ride.
Upon wind, water, fire or earth
remove the shell, pod, the placenta 
rebirth upon the graves of fettered time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/21/2010 7:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest "Etheree Me" Deb. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/20/2010 8:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Iolanda
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Date: 6/20/2010 7:27:00 PM
I love the natural flow of this poem. The rebirth of unfettered time is just awesome. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Blessings, Joseph
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Date: 6/20/2010 7:06:00 PM
A beautiful poem. congratulations on your hm
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Date: 6/20/2010 9:47:00 AM
A lot more to this poem than the physical eye beholds. An excellent write... thought provoking. Congrats.
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Date: 6/20/2010 4:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your HM in my contest, Deb. I loved those lines about the wonder ride, removing shell, pod and placenta! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 6/13/2010 11:14:00 AM
This is a wonderful Etheree..captured me from the start...beautiful writing! Kisses, Emily
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Date: 6/12/2010 6:29:00 AM
A very intriguing etheree, and I especially enjoyed your sprinkling of alliteration, too! --nikko :)
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Date: 6/9/2010 1:49:00 PM
The last 3 lines conclude this nice poem. The title is fitting, nice work...Raul
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Date: 6/8/2010 12:19:00 PM
Nice Etheree, Deborah. Good luck in the contest with this meaningful write. Love, Dane
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Date: 6/8/2010 12:01:00 PM
Interesting thooughts that you have penned in this one...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 6/8/2010 6:13:00 AM
A contest winner it looks to be. Wishing you the best should you enter it. Have a beautiful day Deb. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/8/2010 12:40:00 AM
awesome awesome this is so full of feeling harry
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Date: 6/7/2010 7:48:00 PM
I like this one Deborah. Good luck be yours...cheers Margaret
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Date: 6/7/2010 5:59:00 PM
great write, enjoyed today!!
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Date: 6/7/2010 5:55:00 PM
Nice Etheree with intermittant alliteration apt images. I enjoyed it, Deborah
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Date: 6/7/2010 5:08:00 PM
Good day D.G.,Nice on the etheree, I've been seeing a lot of these today. Contest or what. Which ever it is enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 6/7/2010 5:08:00 PM
NICE ETHEREE -IRMA
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