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Unfamiliar Place

I’m falling and falling This place is unknown It took me awhile to get here I’m so darn scared That I want to leave What am I to do here This is an unknown territory I can hardly breathe My heart is beating fast I’m about to suffocate I look up and see a big sign In bold letters that read “ Welcome To Love Land” Alexis Y 9- 29-17

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Date: 10/3/2017 2:12:00 PM
A special place to arrive at indeed, Alexis. A joyous poem w/a scary beginning. But, as in love, all ends well. Very fine poetry, dear. Love and joy forever.
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Date: 10/1/2017 8:46:00 AM
Well done my friend...nice place to visit...but then...great verse Alexis...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 9/30/2017 12:34:00 PM
There's no map available Alexis, you are on your own, Well done...
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Date: 9/30/2017 1:07:00 AM
Colorado? :) hope the journey is less frightening now ...
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Date: 9/29/2017 3:37:00 PM
isn't it both magical and dizzying to be in that space of love?... splendid pen, alexis.. huggs
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Date: 9/29/2017 3:11:00 PM
Your muse is on fire Alexis...
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