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Unfair Calories

Unfair Calories 

Chocolate cake, 
can be eaten fast or slow. 
Depends on who, 
is at the end of the fork. 
But I tell you true, 
there is a thing that happens, 
to... a... few. 

They are taken to better places, 
where cake rules, and mountains of icing...
are skied upon while laughing to music, 
yet written down. 
They are shown that sweetness, 
like love must be enjoyed, 
relished like flowers in spring, 
strawberries in summer, 
or ice-cream in fall.

The only defense to the delightful dangers, 
a friend that is willing to walk, 
and diet with you. 
Not a short path, 
but a long and enduring adventure.
At the end of which there is always to be, 
a celebration of winning; 
taste without temptation, 
tempted, but not lost, 
saved, by a loved one, 
from the personal cost. 

You are worth everything, 
your value unmatched, 
unmeasured, 
but true.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Meck Avatar
March 12, 2020 at 6:08 AM
How lovely and encouraging to know there is a way out after sweet ensnaring chocolate taste
Babcock Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 12:36 PM
Oh love this creative piece and love that chocolate in everything but moderation is key.. Need to get out walking winter has been to long. love phyl
Wolf Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 12:29 PM
Take me to the 'Chocolate Mountain! Calories, Shmalories! LOL. ~ Gershon
DiMino Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 10:58 AM
Everything in moderation. But this lovely poem should be read by many and often. Love it!
Sands Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 9:58 AM
Great one Ann. It also inspires me to take a walk :)
Proxenos Avatar
February 20, 2020 at 9:24 AM
Calories are our enemy but chocolate cake is our best friend. Now what to we do, lets weigh it up and see! Great message and wonderful poem. Blessings Ann, Jennifer.
Agustin Avatar
February 19, 2020 at 10:55 PM
Thanks for sharing this... poetically sweet. God bless you.
Agustin Avatar
February 19, 2020 at 10:54 PM
Thanks for sharing this... poetically sweet. God bless you.
Kendrick Avatar
February 19, 2020 at 4:18 AM
It is good to have such a friend. Enjoyed reading your work. I could picture that chocolate cake. Thanks for dropping by. Sara
Adams Avatar
February 18, 2020 at 8:21 PM
I have learned to take small tastes and savor them because they are forbidden for me... now come walk with me, we could walk the trails for miles and miles...always need someone to walk with so as not to be bored... love this write! hugs
Foster Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 10:37 AM
I would love to walk in the hills with you... we would talk about the flowers, and funny insects...
Pandit Avatar
February 18, 2020 at 11:34 AM
A poem as sweet as a chocolate cake--and with a message! Lovely write, Ann.
Achilles Avatar
February 18, 2020 at 4:22 AM
Chocolate cake- my forbidden delight, like your words- delightful, Julie
Romios Avatar
February 18, 2020 at 3:41 AM
Hi Anne~ In a hugely overweight society, killing themselves with delights..a timely poem. I enjoy these types of Poems whose feet are planted firmly on Mother Earth. The hue and cry over Climate Change~ but nary a whisper of Body Change. Friendship keeps us so alive. Over-indulging in friendship is sanity. Panagiota xx
Foster Avatar
February 18, 2020 at 9:15 AM
I love your life point of view... God Bless you... and have the very sweetest day. Ann
Somadas Avatar
February 18, 2020 at 1:26 AM
What a treat to eat.. I never mind calories.. Eat slow or fast depends on the taste.. Sweet lovely poem Ann..
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