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Dropped in to visit...impulsive action For Brian Strand contest Any Form/Any Theme Honorable Mention

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Luna Jj

Date: 1/21/2012 11:54:00 AM

wow..I love it! XO

M.I.A .

Date: 1/20/2012 1:06:00 AM

congrats carol! always love your monoku

Taoi Chanan

Date: 1/19/2012 4:47:00 AM

WELL DONE CAROL.. OH AND HAVE PUT A NEW ONE UP CALLED CURLING.. I REALLY LIKE READING YOUR WORK BY THE WAY. VERY ORIGINAL..AL I LIKE THIS.. )) X

Sarah Mullan

Date: 1/18/2012 2:09:00 PM

Congratulations Carol. Love, Sarah

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/17/2012 8:02:00 PM

Congratulations, Carol. I seem to remember you did one like this before!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/17/2012 5:15:00 PM

Carol Brown ..u r invited to join in the Clerihew War ...write a Clerihew about anyone famous and send it back to Charles Hinshaw. Then ask someone else to write one...keep the fun alive!

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/17/2012 4:46:00 PM

Brian liked this, and so do I. Congratulations on winning with this entry.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/17/2012 4:33:00 PM

Congrats on your placing in Brian's contest..Enjoyed your short line to can be interperted so many ways...Thanks for stopping by..I hope that your are feeling better...Sara

Don Johnson

Date: 1/17/2012 3:23:00 PM

great piece of poetry, interaction, well done Carol...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/17/2012 9:49:00 AM

congrats Carol on HM with this exciting entry.. hope all is well ..and u are felling better luv..

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/17/2012 8:11:00 AM

This is wonderful Carol, every word fits together so well then the title explains all. harry

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/17/2012 6:24:00 AM

Congrats are in order, Carol...yeah! Go OHIO!! ha ha...Coffee builds on me...the more I drink, the more poetry I read! haha. Gotta tell ya...this monoku , if it were true..would give me quite the panic! I have to vacuum and dust and shower and put on something nice and burn some intense cookie smelling candles..please call b4 you stop over here. ha hah. Love, Gwendolen

Kelly Zakerski

Date: 1/17/2012 3:30:00 AM

Love it! Congratulations!