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Unexpected

Dropped in to visit...impulsive action



For Brian Strand contest 
Any Form/Any Theme
Honorable Mention

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Luna Jj

January 21, 2012 at 11:54 AM

wow..I love it! XO

M.I.A .

January 20, 2012 at 1:06 AM

congrats carol! always love your monoku

Taoi Chanan

January 19, 2012 at 4:47 AM

WELL DONE CAROL.. OH AND HAVE PUT A NEW ONE UP CALLED CURLING.. I REALLY LIKE READING YOUR WORK BY THE WAY. VERY ORIGINAL..AL I LIKE THIS.. )) X

Sarah Mullan

January 18, 2012 at 2:09 PM

Congratulations Carol. Love, Sarah

Andrea Dietrich

January 17, 2012 at 8:02 PM

Congratulations, Carol. I seem to remember you did one like this before!

Gwendolen Song

January 17, 2012 at 5:15 PM

Carol Brown ..u r invited to join in the Clerihew War ...write a Clerihew about anyone famous and send it back to Charles Hinshaw. Then ask someone else to write one...keep the fun alive!

Robert Pettit

January 17, 2012 at 4:46 PM

Brian liked this, and so do I. Congratulations on winning with this entry.

Sara Kendrick

January 17, 2012 at 4:33 PM

Congrats on your placing in Brian's contest..Enjoyed your short line to can be interperted so many ways...Thanks for stopping by..I hope that your are feeling better...Sara

Don Johnson

January 17, 2012 at 3:23 PM

great piece of poetry, interaction, well done Carol...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 17, 2012 at 9:49 AM

congrats Carol on HM with this exciting entry.. hope all is well ..and u are felling better luv..

Harry Horsman

January 17, 2012 at 8:11 AM

This is wonderful Carol, every word fits together so well then the title explains all. harry

Gwendolen Song

January 17, 2012 at 6:24 AM

Congrats are in order, Carol...yeah! Go OHIO!! ha ha...Coffee builds on me...the more I drink, the more poetry I read! haha. Gotta tell ya...this monoku , if it were true..would give me quite the panic! I have to vacuum and dust and shower and put on something nice and burn some intense cookie smelling candles..please call b4 you stop over here. ha hah. Love, Gwendolen