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Dropped in to visit...impulsive action

For Brian Strand contest 
Any Form/Any Theme
Honorable Mention

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 1/21/2012 11:54:00 AM
wow..I love it! XO
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Date: 1/20/2012 1:06:00 AM
congrats carol! always love your monoku
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Date: 1/19/2012 4:47:00 AM
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Date: 1/18/2012 2:09:00 PM
Congratulations Carol. Love, Sarah
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Date: 1/17/2012 8:02:00 PM
Congratulations, Carol. I seem to remember you did one like this before!
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Date: 1/17/2012 5:15:00 PM
Carol Brown ..u r invited to join in the Clerihew War ...write a Clerihew about anyone famous and send it back to Charles Hinshaw. Then ask someone else to write one...keep the fun alive!
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Date: 1/17/2012 4:46:00 PM
Brian liked this, and so do I. Congratulations on winning with this entry.
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Date: 1/17/2012 4:33:00 PM
Congrats on your placing in Brian's contest..Enjoyed your short line to can be interperted so many ways...Thanks for stopping by..I hope that your are feeling better...Sara
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Date: 1/17/2012 3:23:00 PM
great piece of poetry, interaction, well done Carol...
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Date: 1/17/2012 9:49:00 AM
congrats Carol on HM with this exciting entry.. hope all is well ..and u are felling better luv..
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Date: 1/17/2012 8:11:00 AM
This is wonderful Carol, every word fits together so well then the title explains all. harry
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Date: 1/17/2012 6:24:00 AM
Congrats are in order, Carol...yeah! Go OHIO!! ha ha...Coffee builds on me...the more I drink, the more poetry I read! haha. Gotta tell ya...this monoku , if it were true..would give me quite the panic! I have to vacuum and dust and shower and put on something nice and burn some intense cookie smelling candles..please call b4 you stop over here. ha hah. Love, Gwendolen
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Date: 1/17/2012 3:30:00 AM
Love it! Congratulations!
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Date: 1/17/2012 3:04:00 AM
Congratulations Carol x
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Date: 1/16/2012 9:07:00 PM
Congratulations Carol
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Date: 1/16/2012 6:50:00 PM
Expectedly excellent, luv, jag
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Date: 1/16/2012 5:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Carol.
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Date: 1/16/2012 4:33:00 PM
Those kinds of visits can be good or bad depending on who is paying the visit! In your case, would be wonderful. Congrats on your win, CArol.
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Date: 1/16/2012 3:13:00 PM
scary too I bet! Light & Love
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Date: 1/16/2012 2:56:00 PM
Wishing you God's best in everything you do! Thanks for the comments and your wonderful poems! God bless!!! JP
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Date: 1/16/2012 2:39:00 PM
Hope you got a cup of tea...lol. congrats on a great one. Bg
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Date: 1/16/2012 2:24:00 PM
Carol great monoku, good luck for the contest, many thanks for all of your very kind comments..David
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Date: 1/16/2012 2:15:00 PM
LOL, I'm sure you're always a welcome guest, Carol
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Date: 1/16/2012 11:52:00 AM
Great write Carol my friend... Congrats..... luv Michael
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Date: 1/16/2012 10:57:00 AM
I am so glad you did, love and light Carol, and a hug for the day, vie
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