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Unequal You, Unequal Me

Imagine if you will, a world of books where all the words lead to the same place no matter the beginning (no matter the middle) A world where trees are never planted, never grow, but always retain the same shape, same number of branches, never varying (not even a little) Some don't have to imagine, some want to make it true Some want to mold us into identical shapes and hues (even if it's me, even if it's you) Some don't like the chaos that entails in a society that is free, but instead would prefer micromanagement from above... ...to put it frankly, love, they wanna flatten the sea They don't like the mess that is You The mess that is Me They want to make an equal society... ...but how drab would that be? To see a mirror-still pond instead of a crashing sea. To see a sky full of clouds, all perfectly round with none too small and none too big They want to make things all the same so let's involve the government! Make every child a giant, and every giant a child Let politicians and bureaucrats hold the measuring stick (Family and Friends? Churches and Charity? How ludicrous!) They are the ones with exclusive rights to the reins You are just the pieces of their sadistic game ...but they come dressed as an angel of light with words so sweet it would make you cry We want to make an equal society Ha! I wonder why! So as to challenge the pigs of Orwell's Animal Farm? "Some animals don't deserve to be as equal as I." We just want to make things fair, a little here and a little there Don't be so close-minded, just give it a try! But not everyone low wants to be raised high Not all who strive for height wants to be chopped down We are humans We like to conquer mountains by the sweat of our brow, by the glint of our eyes... ...come whatever may, we are persistent! We are humans We like the free ride, to claim the spoils without ever needing to try To be showered with everything we could ever need like manna from the sky We are humans... (no one ever said we were consistent)

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Date: 4/27/2021 8:06:00 PM
Beautifully written with so much grace. Your lines are thick with craft and fascination. Great work.
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Date: 4/16/2021 6:35:00 AM
Unequally equal I guess. It does appear however that some are more equal than others. ;0)
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Date: 4/11/2021 1:04:00 PM
Variety is the spice of life.
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Date: 4/10/2021 7:37:00 PM
No it would never do, to be all equal, Timothy, or we would be writing poetry as good as this. Wonderful to read such inspiring enlightenment.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/11/2021 10:02:00 AM
Thanks Harry! You are too kind...
Date: 4/9/2021 9:13:00 AM
I completely agree and you expressed it so well! We can see so much of this happening in the world today and it is threatening our freedoms. We aren't cookie cutter people with the same exact wants/needs. I like your line: But not everyone low wants to be raised high. A fav!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/10/2021 4:20:00 PM
Honored by the fav :) Thank you. Trying to "equalize" everyone feels unnatural to me and anti-human. We shouldn't seek sameness but be delighted by the differences.
Date: 4/7/2021 12:44:00 AM
You come and go and constantly forget me. Oh well we can't satisfy all. Beautiful reflections.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/7/2021 10:22:00 PM
Soup Mail.
Date: 4/6/2021 3:31:00 PM
I get this one EXACTLY, Timothy. You think like me (though I do not always write in the way that you do!!) This poem has a style that i actually HAVE used when I grow reflective!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/6/2021 7:27:00 PM
A little Seussian, eh? Glad you enjoyed this Andrea. This poem was inspired from a political post (meme) and it got me thinking about how much I dislike control freaks that want to micromanage everything ... and how people In power lure those into their webs by virtuous sounding creeds like “equality” (which they then use as a hammer against you ... to control you).
Date: 4/6/2021 1:00:00 PM
This brought to mind the “Twilight Zone” narrated by Rod Serling.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/6/2021 2:11:00 PM
Twilight Zone will always hold a special place in my heart for its thought provoking messages and curious stories.
Date: 4/6/2021 12:59:00 PM
I like how you expressed this piece. Unfortunately/fortunately depending on who’s perspective one aligns with, we will never truly experience equality until the next life. I like how thought provoking your pieces are. Blessings Rick. Thanks for your visits Timothy.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/6/2021 2:09:00 PM
Equality is a tricky thing to nail down, especially considering the different ways people define. In this poem my definition is in the negative sense. Sameness. Lack of variety. None of us are equal but are blessed with different gifts and different circumstances. Glad you could visit and lay down your thoughts.
Date: 4/5/2021 12:31:00 PM
hey timothy! i enjoyed this poem very much. in some ways, it reminded me of dr. seuss, and i mean that as a high compliment. he was very good at conveying messages in a simple child-like way but he got his points across very powerfully, as you have in this excellent work...
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/5/2021 1:13:00 PM
Funny that you say that. I read Dr Seuss to my two nieces nearly every night. His contagious rhymes and style is easy to creep inside one’s mind! Glad you enjoyed. My personal favorite Seuss is “Oh, the Places You’ll Go!”

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