Unending Rapture

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Humming bliss current throbs within Our heart's open, we go therein Pulse of aliveness beckons us Erst desires no longer nonplus Silenced is outer worldly din 04-October-2022

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Bill Baker

Date: 10/4/2022 10:29:00 PM

Nice Quintilla, Unseeking Seeker. Beautiful picture of nature's butterfly. Bill

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/5/2022 6:16:00 PM

Thank you, Bill

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/4/2022 2:01:00 AM

With a flower like that, what butterfly would want to leave?

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/4/2022 2:59:00 AM

Becky Forbes

Date: 10/3/2022 7:02:00 PM

Yes, please!!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/4/2022 12:57:00 AM

Sigrid Ermine

Date: 10/3/2022 6:08:00 PM

Compelled Seeker, to say how enlivening your verse is, absolute essential. I'm so happy you have it, and glad you share truth.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/4/2022 12:56:00 AM

Thank you, Sigurd ~ yes, I can affirm that bliss in permanence is imbibed as soon as we empty ourselves of trivial earthy goals and enter silence