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Unending Love

I graduated with honors at medical school, And wished to settle in my own tradition No frivolous girl deserved to be my wife, life’s cruel, I wanted the best that was my ambition. It was always a desire that my love will be unending, So that when I give my heart it will be completely A character that despite all, ‘twill be so befriending A pleasing lass that can only show her love so sweetly. In this restless world marred by heretic modernism True love that I always wanted, is oft ended before it began No one of those I met cares about reciprocal altruism Life on the campus took the semblance of a game plan. So when I’ll finally meet my true and only love It must, like it or not, be something enduring for ever. I have to find an endearing cooing caring dove A lasting marriage success will be our endeavor. I met her on a small hill where she fell upon the moss, Together we hobbled to an inn where care was tended. It was love at first sight and my proposal I put across, We talked and ideas exchanged, all was truly splendid. Thus I decided that she was to be my dearest wife, Had she but refused, would have been the end of my life.

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Date: 5/20/2021 11:45:00 AM
Yes, a wonderful loving marriage. I cry for my Dad and for you too. True love is the best and creates the cruelest heartbreak. <3
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Date: 5/20/2021 11:28:00 AM
It’s wonderful how you found your true Love Victor, the perfect pairing. A lovely write… Belle
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Date: 5/19/2021 11:17:00 AM
A wonderful story Victor... Enjoyed reading this... God bless.. ~ Ani
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Date: 5/18/2021 11:33:00 PM
Love this, Victor, says so much about you also.
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Date: 5/18/2021 5:12:00 PM
A sweet love story, Victor!
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Date: 5/18/2021 1:13:00 PM
A most enjoyable read Victor. A man who sets standards and then remains true to himself, a very admirable quality.
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Date: 5/18/2021 12:07:00 PM
Victor, was this one autobiographical. I ask this because I know sometimes you invent stories, and I did not know if you had been in medical school. Quite an accomplishment if you were!!
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 5/18/2021 12:18:00 PM
I was at University but not as a medical person. The story is part fictitious.
Date: 5/18/2021 8:56:00 AM
Great ending story, Victor. I do believe in love at first sight :) Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/18/2021 8:37:00 AM
A wonderful story of the coming together of two people who were perfectly matched. Enjoyable reading, Victor.
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Date: 5/18/2021 6:15:00 AM
That's a beautiful love story. Glad you found your love... So beautifully narrated...
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Date: 5/18/2021 4:44:00 AM
That special feeling of falling in love, simply divine--as is the sound of your poem. Enjoyed the happy ending.
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Date: 5/18/2021 3:54:00 AM
I appreciated perusing your romantic tale, and I'm happy that you, at last, discovered what you searched for. You consumed the time on earth together, I realize it is difficult to fail to remember this extraordinary love, yet life needs to proceed.
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Date: 5/18/2021 3:28:00 AM
It was destined to be Victor. Tom
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Date: 5/18/2021 3:06:00 AM
- I think you were a wonderful couple ... who shared a true love, Victor - A lovely poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/18/2021 2:08:00 AM
Glad you finally found her and were able to spend the rest of your life with her, Victor, she must have been truly special :)
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