Arthur Vaso Poet Free verse

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Unease

Unease

You see the illusions
Of the demented mind
Whining like a victum
When he is the perpetrator of the crime

I wonder if they see
How crazy they appear to be
Or do they wander inside their distorted minds
Blaming their own ignorance on others brilliant kinds

Whine whine whine
Why do they
Trumpists and gods poets 
Why oh why the deceit and being unkind?

I take my wine with Jesus
St Patrick and the divine
After a few I used the plural
When the devil is but one with no rhyme

With Cork and Kerry
The Celtic poets get merry
Ignoring the ones lacking merriment and rum
Bitterness blaming no talent on others shun

Digging deep into Jewish bones

The ignorant lack the light and must be shown

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Old Man Emu October 23, 2016 at 2:57 PM A thought provoking lament Arthur, you have penned these thoughts so well and deep. Enjoyed your poem. Regards, Craig Arthur Vaso October 30, 2016 at 7:10 PM Thank you so much Craig, much appreciated!

Andrea Dietrich October 22, 2016 at 9:16 PM Yes, a lot of unease in the world today. Your poem leaves us much to ponder, Arthur. Loved that last line. It summed it up quite nicely. Arthur Vaso October 30, 2016 at 7:07 PM Thank you Andrea, your smile and kindness is the light that shines bright!

Alexis Y. October 22, 2016 at 7:57 PM Hi Arthur, You have penned a eye opening thought provoking write. It's so sad that there are people like this- Alexis Arthur Vaso October 30, 2016 at 7:06 PM So sad indeed! :) thank you Alexis

Seren Roberts October 22, 2016 at 5:31 PM well done, your usual good standard....Seren Arthur Vaso October 30, 2016 at 7:05 PM You can just call me Mr Elite!!! LOL :)

Tim Smith October 22, 2016 at 4:15 PM People like that make me uneasy... I'll be hiding at the Cork. Arthur Vaso October 30, 2016 at 7:05 PM Those type of people linger here and there, even on soup, and portray themselves as the vitums much like Trump does. I often wonder if they realize most see through the deceptions and lies?

Nette Onclaud October 21, 2016 at 12:31 PM how disturbing can this world be... powerful write, arthur!,,huggs Arthur Vaso October 30, 2016 at 7:00 PM Thanks Nette, with people like you, I have confidence in the future! :) Hugs!

Carolyn Devonshire October 21, 2016 at 3:02 AM I have always wondered what goes on in the minds of those who perpetrate crimes, deceive others and are also unkind. Taking your "wine with Jesus" steers you in a better direction. The line about "Trumpists" seems to be describing a politician. Hmm Very well written, Arthur. It's good to read your work again. Hugs, Carolyn Arthur Vaso October 30, 2016 at 6:59 PM Thank you so much Carolyn! I am smiling at your notice of the wine, Trump has money and power, there are many who do not but have the same attitudes and treatment of others, and thats truly sad!