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Unease You see the illusions Of the demented mind Whining like a victum When he is the perpetrator of the crime I wonder if they see How crazy they appear to be Or do they wander inside their distorted minds Blaming their own ignorance on others brilliant kinds Whine whine whine Why do they Trumpists and gods poets Why oh why the deceit and being unkind? I take my wine with Jesus St Patrick and the divine After a few I used the plural When the devil is but one with no rhyme With Cork and Kerry The Celtic poets get merry Ignoring the ones lacking merriment and rum Bitterness blaming no talent on others shun Digging deep into Jewish bones The ignorant lack the light and must be shown

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Old Man Emu

Date: 10/23/2016 2:57:00 PM

A thought provoking lament Arthur, you have penned these thoughts so well and deep. Enjoyed your poem. Regards, Craig

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/30/2016 7:10:00 PM

Thank you so much Craig, much appreciated!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/22/2016 9:16:00 PM

Yes, a lot of unease in the world today. Your poem leaves us much to ponder, Arthur. Loved that last line. It summed it up quite nicely.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/30/2016 7:07:00 PM

Thank you Andrea, your smile and kindness is the light that shines bright!

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/22/2016 7:57:00 PM

Hi Arthur, You have penned a eye opening thought provoking write. It's so sad that there are people like this- Alexis

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/30/2016 7:06:00 PM

So sad indeed! :) thank you Alexis

Seren Roberts

Date: 10/22/2016 5:31:00 PM

well done, your usual good standard....Seren

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/30/2016 7:05:00 PM

You can just call me Mr Elite!!! LOL :)

Tim Smith

Date: 10/22/2016 4:15:00 PM

People like that make me uneasy... I'll be hiding at the Cork.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/30/2016 7:05:00 PM

Those type of people linger here and there, even on soup, and portray themselves as the vitums much like Trump does. I often wonder if they realize most see through the deceptions and lies?

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/21/2016 12:31:00 PM

how disturbing can this world be... powerful write, arthur!,,huggs

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/30/2016 7:00:00 PM

Thanks Nette, with people like you, I have confidence in the future! :) Hugs!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/21/2016 3:02:00 AM

I have always wondered what goes on in the minds of those who perpetrate crimes, deceive others and are also unkind. Taking your "wine with Jesus" steers you in a better direction. The line about "Trumpists" seems to be describing a politician. Hmm Very well written, Arthur. It's good to read your work again. Hugs, Carolyn

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/30/2016 6:59:00 PM

Thank you so much Carolyn! I am smiling at your notice of the wine, Trump has money and power, there are many who do not but have the same attitudes and treatment of others, and thats truly sad!