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Undying Question

A tin of chocolates
The sun slowly retreating
In beautiful flame

A glance in secret
The firm push of resolution
Butterflies dancing

Girlie smile
The light of welcome
At last --"Will you be mine?"

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Andrea Dietrich

February 16, 2013 at 8:03 PM

Congrats on the winners circle. I thought yours was a very well crafted set of haiku!!

Connie Gildersleeve

February 16, 2013 at 5:17 PM

Congrats on your win Isalah. An awesome poem my friend. Connie

Audrey Haick

February 16, 2013 at 3:40 PM

Congratulations on another fine win, Isaiah!

Poet Destroyer A

February 16, 2013 at 1:59 PM

ISAIAH, thank you for the support, and fun loving haiku + questionku... Congrats, with all my heart :-) LINDA

Sara Kendrick

February 10, 2013 at 2:07 PM

Enjoyed reading your passionate work..Very well written..If for a contest, it should be in the winners' list..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

February 9, 2013 at 11:17 AM

so here is your really sweet side. I am liking it mucho!! love that title too.

Charmaine Chircop

February 9, 2013 at 8:49 AM

No girlie can resist chocolates and poetry.Im sure she d say yes.At last valentines virus completely got ya cowboy :).zz Lovely poem full of rpmance and churning butterflies.tmfvs

Charmaine Chircop

February 9, 2013 at 8:45 AM

No girlie can resists chocolates and poetry so im sure she would say yes.Dont fotget a rose sssh:)..Lovely valentine virus..It got ya at last Cowboy:-$ zB-).Very romantic valentine poem and wonderful butterflies churning reminded me of my teenage days..tmfvs