Undying Love- a Reversible Poem

I shall think of you, my love
with all my heart you’re mine
like an ivory turtle dove
in flight we shall be divine

you bestow deep adoration
with each touch and embrace
you are my God-given creation
throughout time and space

I shall need all of you, my dear
I crave your existence and mind
I have starved for you to be near
since the stars have aligned

we need not riches nor gems
all we have is what we are
when intense pain condemns
I shall wish upon our star 

I shall fear not fate, my sweet
pure kismet shall be our destiny
when life feels like defeat
I shall carry your heart in me

believe me when I said do
vows were sworn with affection
I am so proud to married to you
for we have a perpetual connection


A Reversible Poem Poetry Contest
Jesse Rowe
August 21, 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 9/25/2018 10:12:00 PM
Belated congrats on your win, Laura. Beautifully done.
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Date: 9/9/2018 4:58:00 PM
Laura, I judged this contest with my teenage daughter and she absolutely loved this poem (as did I). Congratulations on your top finish.
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Date: 8/27/2018 5:36:00 PM
Beautifully done, Luloo, not only is it a beautiful poem but it works just as well either way. All the best. John
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